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The man that has no name.

Poem By: xXBioChemXx
Poetry


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Submitted: Feb 26, 2008    Reads: 37    Comments: 2    Likes: 2   


The man that has no name,

the girl that is to blame,

he loved her but it's up in flames.

The man that has no name.

 

She's broken his heart

he's fallen apart

his soul is getting dark

The man that has no name

 

He is over her

but, still, his soul grows blacker

and he attacks her,

with words he won't rescind

The man that has no name

 

He trusts only one;

his mind is coming undone

it isn't any fun

for The man that has no name

 

The man has grown older

he wishes he could hold her

he wants life to be over

The man that has no name

 

His world comes to a close,

and this much he knows

it's his fault for not sharing

The man that wishes for a name

 

Leaving Earth, The man has grown stronger

and she weeps no longer

for The Man who now has a Name


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Comments:

I loved the pace and tone of this. good job!

Posted: Jun 14, 2008

Author Comment:

It used to be me but I have someone that keeps me together.Thanx ;)

I really like this poem, I am proud that you are my great nephew. thanks for sharing this with me, and I hope to see you all again soon.
love Aunt Brenda, from Michigan

Posted: Jun 29, 2008



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