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Poem By: xXBioChemXx
Poetry


For the fourth time, couldnt rhyme View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Feb 26, 2008    Reads: 31    Comments: 3    Likes: 1   


Why does she not notice what I do for her?

Can't we be what I want us to be?

How does she not see the love in my eyes when everyone else does?

Why do I always love people who don't love me?

Why do people fall in love with me and I can't love them back?

Why do I keep getting hurt?

How did I get stuck in this body when it is the wrong one?

Why me?


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My valiant arm unseen
Her arms do not receive
My valiant heart disregarded
Her heart evades what's started

Poor soul....you're not alone! Keep writing!

Posted: Feb 27, 2008

Author Comment:

never fear, I will. I am right now!

I second that, your not alone! Nice job. ~ KB

Posted: Feb 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Praise from someone as great as you is high indeed! ;)

Ah, we've all been there! The right one will show up one of these day. Nice poem!

Posted: Mar 10, 2008

Author Comment:

thanx



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