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this is my first vampire ANYTHING,let alone rhyming poem. View table of contents...
Submitted: Apr 29, 2008 Reads: 73 Comments: 10 Likes: 6
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WOOT!!! Yes, well, you know what I think of this.. but I shall say it again. Its fantasticly, amazingly, beautiful. I loved it before, and I love it more now. Just cuz I can actually read it without having to piece it together.. haha.
Posted: Apr 29, 2008
I liked this alot. Especially the description^.^
Posted: May 17, 2008
ouuu, chilling. I liked it, I had the whole picture in my mind throughout the whole thing. Powerful words my dear!
Steph(:
Posted: May 21, 2008
I liked it I can't ryme well but you do good.
Posted: May 23, 2008
Oh GOD ur poem is way better than mine buddy....too good and chilling....scary....
I always wondered , 'do vampires exist?'
Posted: Jun 8, 2008
hi! frankie. this is my first vampire poem. i m sure, a vampire ll come alive reading it and take u to their world, u so desire. and rhyming adds to the dramatic effect. an enjoyble read. lol. ;-)
Posted: Jun 13, 2008
YAY!!!! vampire literature is wicked. twilight rocks. & so does this. =)
Posted: Jun 21, 2008
omg thats so awesome
Posted: Jun 24, 2008
So you have this vampire fascination too? :-) Anything about vamp is interesting. Wonderful poem. ^^
Posted: Jul 18, 2008
this was really good :) i love the style of the poem and it flows very well :D and your word choice was exquisite ;)
Posted: Oct 16, 2008
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