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Element of Fire

Poetry By: XxDarkAngelEyesxX

Um...it's basically just describing fire and what it's like when u get burnt alive.

Submitted:Jun 22, 2010    Reads: 113    Comments: 9    Likes: 4   

I can feel the fire around me.

It surrounds me in a circle.

I can feel it burning my feet, its getting closer.

I try to walk backwards, but I slip.

The fire burns my back.

The pain worsens, I try to scream but nothing comes out.

My own fear is coming true.

Being burnt alive.

I feel the fire crawling up my arms and legs.

My eyes are closed, but I still see it.

The fire covers me.

I can't escape, I start to lay down.

I can't feel my legs anymore, i feel a sting on my shoulders.

I'm completely covered.

A couple more minutes an I'll be dead.

I started falling asleep, i couldn't feel anything anymore.

I smell smoke.

My eyes are burning.

The fire...it kills me.


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