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Walking with Shadows

Poetry By: XxPrincessxX

WALKING WITH SHADOWS is a poem I put together about friendship... and how mean they can be, and how we still care... It's called 'walking with shadows' because, even when a friend has put me out, and they are walking by themselves, (only shadows with them...)I will always follow.(reference and meaning from the last 4 lines)

and please, give me your thoughts and COMMENT. I can take criticism.
Xx ash xX

Submitted:Apr 8, 2007    Reads: 176    Comments: 6    Likes: 2   


No one will know

No one will see

The world outside

What you used to be

No one will look

No one will try

To mend your broken life

And fix all your lies

No one will like you

No one will care

They will not even notice

How your life is unfair

People will shout

People will scream

Saying words in ways

That they hardly ever mean

People can mend hearts

But their�easier to tear

Remember how bad you made me feel

And how much I still care


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