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Criticized

Poetry By: youfoundme
Poetry



Have you always been so judge mental? Or am I just realizing it now


Submitted:Feb 7, 2010    Reads: 58    Comments: 0    Likes: 1   


Criticized
Just stop with all the
Comments and move on already,
It's so annoying when your
Getting stared down every second
You're criticizing everything I have
Is there anything left?
That you haven't judged already or
Are you just getting started?
Your looking for something argue
About like always but,
Have you always been so judge mental?
Or am I now just realizing it now
Why should I constantly be apologizing?
Its like I'm asking for forgiveness
Endless amounts of time its unstoppable
Over and over again, I'm getting
So tired of this as the frustration
Boils up inside me, now can't you tell?
I'm sick of it all
How many times do I have to ask?
You to just stop and think about this
Please just stop and think
Look what your doing your,
Breaking the pieces that I've been
Trying to put back together all this time
It's coming to a closing because
It's another game over for you and
I'm just done waiting to see what happens
Next in this story
Because for some reason I
Have this feeling what the ending is
Going to be




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