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The Raw Heart ( Tells All)

Poetry By: youfoundme

I fell for you over and over again until finaly I realized im BETTER OFF WITHOUT YOU , I DESERVE better. in the end you were no good. PLEASE DONT COPY MY POEM IS MY WORK that is WRITTEN from MY HEART

Submitted:Oct 21, 2012    Reads: 22    Comments: 1    Likes: 0   

The Raw Heart ( Tells All)

I fell for your smile,

Your Eyes

Your personality

I fell for it all I liked you for who you were

I let you into my heart

I showed you my true emotions

I liked you alot trust me

I dated you three times each time it didnt work out

but yet i was niave to the reasons why I was

filled with hope and my heart never stopped the feeling i had

for you

my mind was niave to and my eyes seen the good that no one else saw

now its all over and its finally set in it hit me hard

in every possible way emotionally,phyiscally, and mentally

feeling like someone hit me with a million and one bricks

the raw feeling had set to surface and now that everything came to a

dead end they finally disapeared as much as I hoped it would last

despite all of the things agaisnt it and the angery words you said to me

that made me feel like nothing and how were no longer friends

I feel a big weight lifted me up

im better off without you I deserve better


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