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SWAN DANCE

Poem By: zarakmez
Poetry


This is about snow. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jan 4, 2008    Reads: 58    Comments: 3    Likes: 0   


SWAN DANCE

 

Nature doth confess its secrets in whisper so mellow

Hence weaveth an enticing web beyond my dark window

Which reveals to me a day with fiery joy so aglow

That doom’s veil doth in haste retreats its looming shadow.

 

My gaze doth immerse in a view of wildest enticement

My soul sings out a clamor of passion so buoyant

The birth of Snow’s reign in its power yet so nascent

Doth disclose the coming joys of a romance so gallant

 

For yonder, the blooming flakes revel in graceful swan’s dance

Doth seeks pleasure in the wild gallop of horses’ prance

Its twirling robes in horizons afar dazzle my glance

The frail waifs of hopes and joys’ trembling buds it doth enhance

 

Snow so pure doth to worlds yonder spread its white blanket

And doth embrace mountains atop and earth’s feet with velvet

An adornment beautiful as fairest maiden’s anklet

And the dewy morning rose’s yet most fragrant droplet

 

Snow, thy playful flakes doth revel in graceful swan’s dance

The world’s skies and lands thou doth cover the expanse

Thou art the harbinger of beauty’s grace and sweet romance

Thence beckons to mortal’s plea for hope’s ultimate chance.

 


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angelica*
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Awesome writing! This kind of poetry never loses it's grace! Loved it!

Posted: Jan 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks a lot for the kind comments.

I never really got the hang of shakespeare. XD

Xx ash xX

Posted: Jan 14, 2008

Author Comment:

I know....it's quite complicated:) I was trying to experiment with his style of writing:)

In my head, as I read this, it was very sensual almost erotic tones, until I read For Yonder. So, I mentally erased For Yonder (eeeek!) and was swept away in your wording.

Posted: Mar 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks a lot....i have yet to find my style. Hopefully one day i will be able to find the perfect combination of words to create a flawless piece. Thanks so much for reading.



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