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Submitted: Jun 9, 2008 Reads: 47 Comments: 7 Likes: 5
you say there is a meaning to everything
every decision
every destiny
every failure
but why do you challenge me?
This is a game that is hard to win!
Why do you push me farther?
Why do you make me fail?
Is the failure a lesson for my behavior?
Why do you challenge me?
Am I your easiest opponent?
Or your toughest competition?
Sometimes I even doubt myself...
so why do you believe in me?
Why?
Why do you challenge me
to decide my own destiny?
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WOW!! soo deep, and so true!! we do feel challenged by God!!!
Posted: Jun 10, 2008
i am glad i read this...i feel more connected to HIM now...
lovely emotions ZIA....WELL DONE
Posted: Jun 15, 2008
see ? I came back again...i indeed loved this one...this is pure like you are...
Posted: Jul 4, 2008
Zia Jaycee:
Another good one. Gave it an "I Like It" vote.
Recommend re-posting. After capitalizing all words referencing God.
Happy trails,
Ed Bradley.
Posted: Jul 7, 2008
He gave us free will and challenges us to see how faithful we are to him.He knows if we can fight the temptations and serve him we have what it takes.Like the he said "When we are at our weakest he is at his strongest."All we have to do is call upon his name.Another verse I like is "Believe and you shall recieve."
Posted: Aug 4, 2008
it has always been a difficult question with me. Why God put us here. but i think the simple asnwer i found that makes the most sense is that it must be awful lonely, being God. no body else around. so here we are, and if we want to we can love him, and if we do we get the same in return:) i like this one. you should write more!!
Posted: Aug 10, 2008
I have had a challenging few weeks just now.
Only my humble opinion: When he challenges me He helps me grow; although its hrd to recognise that in the midst of such a challenge
Your questioning style is deceptively powerful as it makes one think.
craaig
Posted: Sep 20, 2008
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