Hey this is a poem I wrote quite a bit of time ago but it is still one of my favorites. It kind of reminds you what life is really about :) enjoy love zia
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Submitted: Jul 6, 2008
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Don't be afraid to let go
Don't be afraid to dream
Don't be afraid to protest
Don't be afraid to scream
Don't be afraid to cry
Don't be afraid to lie
Don't be afraid to explore
Don't be afraid to soar
Don't be afraid to seethe
Don't be afraid to breathe
Don't be afraid to give
Don't be afraid to live
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I think that this is an interesting means of expressing what defines living in your own head. It also seems to lead towards an inspirational piece. I enjoyed it good job on this poem.
Posted: Jul 7, 2008
no doubt the message is very very strong...even i did this when I was doing my PG and defied my HOD because she tried to keep me away from my 5months old son and tried to make me drop the exams...my milk secretion stopped and my son had to be bottle fed...i will never forgive her for that...instead of being supportive, she ruined my family's peace and I don't regret giving it back to her at the cost of not getting a job in the same Institution...thanks for reviving that energy back...really loved this one...simple words but indeed adorable...
needless to add my vote would always go for all ur posts....
Posted: Jul 7, 2008
This is really good.Loved this one.
Posted: Aug 4, 2008
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