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Hey this story was inspired by a book I read and my personal experiences w/ religion and spirituality. Hope you enjoy it...love zia View table of contents...
Submitted: Jul 6, 2008 Reads: 27 Comments: 8 Likes: 4
meditation
being one with the Divine
the Divine love of our God
closing your eyes
listening
to his soft and simple words
His love flows through your bloodstream
and warms your hands and fingertips
the silence is eternal
you feel complete
its like heaven
you are with Him
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Zia Jaycee:
Well written! Great job! Most inspirational as well. Liked the way you capitalized words which make reference to God and/or Divinity. Important to me.
Gave it an "I Like It" vote.
Will read the remainder of your postings and, at times, may give each of them "I Like It" votes. Without commenting when doing so.
If you have not done so already, please read my postings entitled:
1. "Love Intended: #1, #2 & #3" in which is discussed, in the comments section, my ideas about writing poetry.
2. "Self Love",
3. "Excitement Inspired In His/Her Time",
4. "Our Grampa Ed",
5. "Here To Stay" &
6. "POEMS".
Again! Thank you!
Happy trails,
Ed Bradley.
Thank you for becoming a fan.
Posted: Jul 7, 2008
Zia Jaycee:
Thank you for becoming a fan.
Happy trails,
Ed Bradley.
Posted: Jul 7, 2008
I enjoyed this and I feel it is a true testament that moment of silence when the world is truly so loud. I find it ironic that the loudest noise for me personally is silence. I have not really tried to sit and just be in silence and relax. I am not a fan of it sort of creeps me out which is sad. Nice read Keep it up.
Posted: Jul 7, 2008
i will never be able to express how 'complete' i am feeling right now after reading this one...I 'felt' as if I am talking to GOD...through YOU...
I loathe noise...SILENCE IS HEAVEN buddy....JUST HEAVEN....
Posted: Jul 7, 2008
hi! zia. that is what meditation does to us - make us in sync with god. and as u say, you feel complete. nothing more truly said. lol. ;-)
Posted: Jul 9, 2008
An inspiring poem. We need to remind ourselves of how wonderful meditation and peace are and only then can we fully appreciate the majesty and mercy of God. Beautifully, simply written.
Posted: Jul 16, 2008
Very Nice. I love the whole tone of the poem. You did a good job Zia. @~ Rose
Posted: Jul 17, 2008
Great poem.Really liked this one alot.This is so ironic.Some of your poems go with mine.Like this one here goes with my two poems "He Cares", and "Gods Love."You write so beautifully.Don't stop.
Posted: Aug 4, 2008
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