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here's some time since I wrote poetry and I wanted to give it ago again.
I was especially inspired by "Limerick For Life" by EdwardJBradleySr and "COUNT TIME" published by Frank Ramtahal here on Booksie.
I've always wondered about the fourth dimension and loved discussing it with a friend of mine. Here's my poems that may sparkle some ideas.
You may notice but I wanted to try different structures. The first is a limerick, the second is a sort of "standard poem" (I don't know if there's any particular name for it) while the third is an attempt on haiku. I may have gotten the static/dynamic part a little wrong, but hope it's good.
Submitted:Jul 11, 2011 Reads: 91 Comments: 21 Likes: 10
Could time be the fourth dimension?
This is the question in tension.
Philosophers think,
Commoners should sink
Their minds in to this attention
The fourth ruling the third
The third ruling the second
The three in a small herd
Pass over by the second
The distance stays just right here
stopped by a stopwatch
but stretches out when time starts
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