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Short Story By: puddleofink
Poetry


this is a true story about me and a friends conversation on a cold rainy night... View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 2, 2008    Reads: 63    Comments: 5    Likes: 1   


It was around 11pm, I had just gone to bed, I was still texting a friend who was going to a friends house.

I cannot remember esactly how the conversation went, but it was something like this.

Jasmine: "oh man its raining, and I have to walk for ages to get to my friends house".

Me: "who cares about getting wet, it hasent rained for months, you should embrace it. You should dance in the rain.

I lay in bed for a while and thought up a poem and sent it to Jasmine it went something like this:

Me: imagine this in a jamaican accent,

The rain has the rythem, and you are the beat. 

Dance in the rain girl, dance with your feet.

*

The rain is the singer and you are the lyrics, 

Paint the earth with with your delicate feet.

*

The rain has come, and so have you.

You have shared a dance with an ancient being,

      A dance long forgotten, a dance truly healing.

Jasmine did reply but I cannot remember what she said because after I sent her the poem I fell asleep in my bed.        

this picture is from deviantart.com from a user called dexterousdamsel

I hope you liked this... ciao -Renee

I did not use my friends real name but I think this was her real name once..


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Comments:

If people viewed all obstacles in life like your lyrics the world would be a much happier place. Good stuff hon. You look like what I would call, One Cool Chic.
Later, R. Storm.

Posted: Jul 4, 2008

Author Comment:

hey thats one cool comment yeah it would be more fun

wow, this was really interesting, I liked it alot:P
Steph(:

Posted: Jul 15, 2008

Author Comment:

hey thanks heaps

I really like this, and actually I adore the rain, especially since it is so rare where I live-to me too much sun is depressing and rainy days are beautiful in my eyes-so inspirational, and I love the smell of rain too...

Posted: Jul 15, 2008

Author Comment:

yeah smells nice a

The rain rox!Interesting poem! I really like it!

Posted: Jul 16, 2008

Author Comment:

tank u

rain=awesome
your poem= awesomer
:]
I really liked how you set this up
and ur poem was brilliant

Posted: Jul 20, 2008

Author Comment:

hay kool thanks heaps yea its so true tho like how it happened its not made up at all well tha poem is but yeah hehe thanks



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