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Man In The Room: The Thirty Day Bucket List

Novel By: Victoria Anne Marie
Religion and spirituality


Looking a a Collaboration on this. The story is mostly going unfinished.

A woman, on the last day she lives, who goes back and describes the past thrity days where she fulfilled a bucket list, and found love, God, and a better life. She relies on an imaginary friend called "The Man In The Room" who is her ideal until she meets Meadow. There's not a huge development on his story yet.

This thing needs a lot of editing. Typos, grammatical errors, curing boredom, etc. And any advice is appreciated. View table of contents...


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Submitted:Apr 26, 2013    Reads: 2    Comments: 0    Likes: 0   


"It too quiet," I thought out loud, still chewing on globs of delicious chocolate chip cookies in my mouth. I got up and stuck in an early Charlie Chaplin film at one o'clock in the afternoon. eleven hours north of what I originally planned.

I fell asleep on the couch for a couple hours, two cookies still balancing on my chest with every deep breath. You know, they say the way an adult breathes in sleep is similar to the way an infant always breathes. There was a drumroll kind of knock at the door. "God,"

I groaned and rolled off of the couch onto the floor, smashing two cookies into my floral print dress, "God," I said, looking down at the mess it made against the mostly white floral fabric. The drumroll like knocking continued.

***The story cuts off here and hasn't continued. Thus here is where I could use some collaboration** All Glory to God in Jesus Name, Amen! God is Able!!





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