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Submitted: Oct 21, 2007    Reads: 70    Comments: 10    Likes: 7   


 

There  was  climax of thought

And all experience shattered in front of me.

*

The most brilliant light broke through

And scorched the outer reality

Singeing the essence of what was

To write a brand new story

But in this book there was only one word

LOVE


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devilrod
devilrod

Nice!

Posted: Oct 22, 2007

Author Comment:

thanks, I made a mistake in spelling: singing was suppoose to be singeing. fixed it now. glad you liked it :)

Nixie
Nixie

This is interesting, certainly makes me ponder the power of that one word! Good job ~ Nixie

Posted: Oct 24, 2007

Author Comment:

Hi Nixie, yes, you know I think about it alot lately. seems we experience something much different in our endevors to love one another, (not that there is anything wrong with it) just that mostly it is love with conditions or attachment of one kind or another. this is fine to begin with but for myself I am at a place where I need to know more about the feeling that is in our cellular makeup not fully awakened yet. Jesus knew this Love and we can too, we are wellmon our way **** take care, much appreciated your interest in this one...best wishes to you - katie

mum55
mum55

Great Work Juliet:)

Posted: Oct 25, 2007

Author Comment:

thanks Juliet :) So Cool about your family being on booksie.
Paul has many fans although some of them aren't on here anymore, he is very well liked and read when he is here. But he keeps trapsing all over the place LOL. he does not like to stay put too long. I am glad that he enjoys his life.:)
I was wild and free myself not so long ago :) I said to him one time: 'allow us to live through your adventures' fasinating the placs he goes huh? so, and he says his brother is here too 'scribblings of a middle age man'
any more family?lol take care Juliet, much love and light * katie

Constantinos Grigoriadis
Constantinos_Grigoriadis

VERY NICE !
I like the way that you write.
Thank you :)

Posted: Oct 28, 2007

Author Comment:

Constantinos, I am very pleased that you liked this one *
Have a fabulously beautiful day ********* katie

Mind Sight

I liked this piece very much. Great job. Love is the most powerful word of all, I would think. I wish you well and God Bless. Lisa

Posted: Nov 1, 2007

Author Comment:

thanks again Lisa, I am so pleased that you liked this one.
some days I think to say: "Gods Love" over and over, hoping to some day 'become' that which i speak. the words do make for a very gentle auric feeling. :) take care Lise * peace, love, and light..katie

IveyBanks
IveyBanks

I love the inspiration expressed here.

That one word, it says so much.

Posted: Nov 6, 2007

Author Comment:

Hi Ivey :) yes *LOVE* it is very inspiring. the Grand Love that is known by our higher selves is shattering to the love known by the ego self. and I don't claim to know this love but only to know of it, which in itself is alot (smile)
so powerful is the *LOVE* that it can break all attachments.
best wishes to you and have a wonderful day ***

half chewed pen
half_chewed_pen

That was the deepest book ever written ..from beginning to end it had me captivated .
I must say I am unable to put the book down, even after reading it.
love and light
paulxxx

Posted: Nov 7, 2007

Author Comment:

LOL. you are funny. I read this captivating story this morning by 'Iveybanks' it's called: 'heart of darkness'
it's about creation and it's truly amazing. I believe you would like it alot if you got the time. it is a little long but well worth it.
take care, until we meet again ****

gerabel
gerabel

"Love... this is my song." A word inspiring so much feeling and written here with much inspiration. Bravo, Katie!

Posted: Nov 7, 2007

Author Comment:

thankyou Jerry :) do you ever wonder about real Love?
lately it is surprising to me to find out that only 4% of the world know what this is, since the Love most people know is of attachment. it's wonderful to know we have so many levels of consciousness to explore, if we so choose, take care Jerry, see you soon....katie

Dody
(not registered user)

"And all experience shattered in front of me."

I love your screen name, first of all. I wish I hadn't been so impulsive when I signed up.

Anyway, I wish I had thought of this line from your poem. Lovely, lovely

Posted: Dec 4, 2007

Author Comment:

Thankyou Dody do you mean 'pen name'? I like your pen name very much. I was a bit impulsive when I joined too. I did not know anything about booksie, was just looking for a place to put the poetry on line cause I had had it at poetry.net but then they closed up and my brother and mom had so much enjoyed seeing it so I looked for another place and found booksie. then I was surprised to learn about evrything else hear LOL. it's great, it has been a real treat meeting and connecting with so many. I am glad you are here now Dody. I see you are very well liked and have a truly talanted gift.
one that just comes through with not alot of effort you know? that shows you have the 'hook up' to your higher self. (smile) it good to read your work and I look forward to more---best wishes and happy holidays...katie

Pratibha
Pratibha

But in this book there was only one word

LOVE



AMEEN....!!!

Posted: May 31, 2008

Author Comment:

HAHAHAHA YES!!! ^_^
do you know what? this came to me during meditation, I thought it so profound that I had to get up and write it down, although I still did not get it absolutely correct I think it is pretty close to what came. you know how you get that connection, (it just flows in) and then all of a sudden it's gone LOl!!!! the wonderful world of connectedness ^_^



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