Go Where The Mountains Sing In Silence

Go where the mountains sing in silence

where the inner ear gives guidance.

This is my own

This is my home

OH, ALOHA

Where the silence is not silent

where it fills your heart with joy

This is my own

This is my home

ALOHA, HELLO

Mine had not been tested

only brought before the song

it is the silent song

I hear it now!

I had been nurtured in the cradle

when the cradle broke,

when the boat had sailed

I stayed and KNEW

I had not failed.

Song, song, come along

but when your gone

I shall not follow.

I would slip into the void

and find the silent song of

God

Comments:

devilrod

Can you play guitar?
You could put your lyrics to music.
Beautiful.

Posted: Apr 17, 2008

Author Comment:

LOl! That's so funny because this was written to music, and the song is from Hawaii (explains the 'Aloha' lol)
yes I don't know the Hawaian words to the song, but the song is called; 'Kawaipunahele' and it is beautiful! you know one of those songs that even though you don't know the words it is so beautiful it isn't even nessesary :)
so Thanks x - I'm trying to write something for my moms birthday (I always put a poem in a card) but this is what came. will have to do. No I can not play guitar, wish I could...have a nice night ^smile^

gerabel

Aloha, Katie! What was your inspiration for this piece, it being quite different? The title is beautiful and the words flow so gently... it would be lovely sung to music. Peace.....Jerry

Posted: Apr 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Hi Jerry! ^^
well lets see, I believe the inspiration comes from thoughts about my brother in whom my mom was so concerned about, he is depressed alot doesn't believe there could possibly be a God that would allow so much pain and so being one who does not wish to hurt again he doesn't allow himself happiness.
All the birthdays were last week (my dad and two brothers) and my moms was this, so I think the meaning here in this poem is that when the cradle of the world (your beliefes,ideas) breaks and the boat sails (emotions) we should not go after them but instead surrender into the void through acceptance. WHEW! wasn't sure I could explain all that LOL! usually I try and then end up erasing it all!
OK, well I hope that makes sense! Thankyou Jerry for such a nice comment, and yes it was written to the music of the Hawaian song I mentioned to Devilrod above- take care Jerry, see you soon, katie :)

EdwardJBradleySr

air:

Great one! Gave this and "Sadness Over A River Of Hope" "I Like It" votes. Both are great postings. Will continue to read your other postings. May give "I Like It" votes without commenting.

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Posted: Apr 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Hi Ed ^smiles^ Thankx a bunch, it's always good to hear from you :-)
Hope all is well on your end, and have a nice weekend
~katie

Pratibha

i wish my poems could sing like yours...lol

mine r all poem -stories....lol

this one is so serene buddy

Posted: May 24, 2008

Author Comment:

you will get there if it is what you really want ^_^
we all have song in the heart...but to be the listener yes?
to listen to the song; the inspiration of God, without hearing your own thoughts. go beyond thought..... ^_^

haha stries are good Pratibha, you will find that you will stretch with imagination and color ^_^

Urja

Beautiful! It brought peace to my heart in the middle of a busy day.

Posted: May 28, 2008

Author Comment:

^_^ ^_^ ^_^ OH GOOOOOOOD!!!!! ^_^

what is up with busy days? don't people know we need peace!
hahahahaah peace I tell you! we need peace! heheheeh
I am being silly :D
well it's good that you can break away and read a little.

Urja, I found a baby bird yesterday mourning out in the parking lot and took care of it all day but sadly this morning he died :(
it has touched me though in a good way, creatures small are so fragile. he was just so little.
I have to go to work now....have a nice day ^_^

Pratibha

I would slip into the void

and find the silent song of

God

As always i am again here in ur home Katie...to find that piece and that selfless love which flows through your pen and reaches all of us...

Posted: Aug 30, 2008

Author Comment:

that's nice, I truly wish that to be ^_^
Thankyou pratibha
xoxoxo

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