Lionhearts five word poetry challenge

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Poem By: air
Religion and Spirituality

Tags: certificate;, light;, grape;, cloud;, flatulence

poem discribes the raising of consciouisness
well, what else do I write about? LOL!!!!
sorry guys maybe I should done something entirely different? oh-well...so here are the five words I was given: CERTIFICATE; LIGHT; GRAPE; CLOUD; FLATUENCE!
HA! thought it would be a problem but noooooooooooooooo!
hehehehehehe! this is a little different than the one I poested on his challenge page. which can probably be deleted sinse we were suppose to post them on our page.
So much fun ^_^ Hope we can do it again.:D
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Submitted: May 23, 2008 Reads: 65 Comments: 11 Likes: 5

the necessary symbolic

CERTIFICATE

that was needed for progress

was a small but significant

LIGHT

('Where is it you say we are going?')

"ah, to the land above thought"

"to the land of intense being"

('Will we travel through

GRAPE

vineyards and apple orchards?')

"YES!"

"You will travel the currents of consciousness

where all things are Bliss" ^_^

"The clustering tormented cycles will be thrown off"

"The

CLOUDS

FLATULENCE

will then dissipate

and disappear"

haha, special thanks toLionheart!

and thanks everyone for having fun

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Comments:

Punishment

Oh katie, I have to say this is the best I have read from all the poems in the challenge!

I LOOOOOOVE it ^^

Posted: May 23, 2008

Author Comment:

HAHA! No I think they are all so really really good
I just read your, geez I was the first one commenting but when I submitted there were two ahead of me LOL whilst I was typing Claasy and someone else were typing at the same time LOL! ya this is great fun! :D
thankx sweetie...my best to you...later ~katie

shiningstar

very nice to bad it was restrited to only 5 words couldof got morintresting with a fewmore lol

Posted: May 23, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh-NO don't give him more ideas LOL!!!
just kidding hahahah
yes I would not mind really, I am hangry, HUNGRY I say for more challenge! NEED MORE CHALLENGE, MUST......BE......CHALLENGED........:D
Thanks shining star, are you going to take the challenge?

Susan Hartline Fouts
(not registered user)

It was a cheery poem and I needed one today. Thanks

Posted: May 23, 2008

Author Comment:

oh good ^_^ (smiles) I am very pleased that I can help in any way :D I love to hear that the inspiration touches others, as I am deep within a healer in the making :)
thankyou susan, will you do the Lionheart 5 words poetry challenge?

Classy Peach

I think this has marked your spot in the writing world of authenticity, originality and finding your voice Katie. I read it as one level of consciousness speaking to another level all within one mind. You fill senses as I immediately smelled the orchards. And, the clouds of flatulance? Well, that only tells me that once you are capable of reaching such wonderful inner joy and self confidence in yourself, any discomfort simply fades away.

Great play on words with currents/grapes too.

Awesome Katie awesome!

Posted: May 23, 2008

Author Comment:

YIPPY AYE AY!!! lol!!!
I had NO idea what would come of the 'flatulence' until I remembered hearing of flatulent clouds then it all came together, shoot; 'flatulent clouds and light' there went three of the words just like that HA! too darn easy LOL!!!
I better stop saying that cause if we do it again who knows what kinda words we will get? but Hey just look at what we are doing when we are challenged huh? every one of us is spitting out some TTTTT rificly top notch stuff!
this type of thing should wipe out anybodys writing block like NOW don't ya think?
well anyway, Thankx hun your comments mean alot since you are a 'Class act' your self ^_^ ^_^ ^_^

gerabel

Wonderful and most enjoyable, Katie!! You did it!! Now why don't you give Lionheart 5 words to write a poem about!!! LOL..................Jerry

Posted: May 24, 2008

Author Comment:

HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAH!!!!!!
That's a good one Jerry!
well, have you thought about taking the challenge?
another idea I have is to issue a catagory to those willing to accept you know? like if most your writing is in one gender or catagory say 'humor or action' then have them do one in 'spirituality or even erotica' LOL!
well lots of ideas huh?
Thankx Jerry.......Hope you are feeling well this weekend ^_^
~katie

MAmberConrad

Awesome job, Katie!! Poor you for having such a rough last word, but you stepped up to the plate and NAILED it! Very good! I have mine posted, as well, so check it out!
MA

Posted: May 24, 2008

Author Comment:

LOL! Yup, I survived the challenge MUAAAAHAHAHAHAHA LOL!

Oh GREAT! you have yours up! can't wait! I am going there right now..........................................* ^_^

Pratibha

My favourite lines r

"The

CLOUDS

of

FLATULENCE

will then dissipate

and disappear"

Katie. i am unable to control my giggling and my family is wondering what's wrong??
lol

Posted: May 24, 2008

Author Comment:

lolololololololol hehehehe me too!
I have been corresponding with you all morning
why don't you just come and visit me? LOl! :D

so, when all this poetry challenge is over maybe you should write a story that we all get together and celebrate somewhere. ^_^ We could all go to canada or australia LOL!!!
I did a story like that once before, I think it is someone elses turn. it's SO much fun! ^_^

StrictlyVee

Katie, when I read this I felt as if the Lord was speaking to my soul, because in the end, all clouds of flatulence will dissipate and disappear. What a joyous poem.

Posted: May 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Ohhhh yes Vee, and even now it is that heven is here but we can not fully see it. it is because of our heavy burdened bodys of pain. I try so much to see all things in a different light, in order to find acceptance and forgivness you know? we really ought to start a discussion forum about such subjects such as spirituality, raising up of the ego, the pain body, frequency's, mantra's, healing, HA etc etc etc you know? LOl
So anyway I am thinking about it though don't know if I wish to be the one to have it on my page you know? it would be open for discussion and who ever has it would be just another member commenting but not inside the box you know?
hahahah I don't know if I am explaining so well...
well ok Vee, I will see you later
much love and light....katie

Kuatsimoto

HAHA! i like it. clouds of flatulence! yes. I also stepped up to the challenge . check it out if u have time! Great poem!!

Posted: May 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh, I have not read yours yet? well then I will have to go there IMEDIATLY!!!! .....................^_^

mum55

hi katie you captured the words so wonderfully....superb poem.......happy days juliet

Posted: Jun 3, 2008

Author Comment:

yes, well, it's YOUR turn!!!!! haha you have to do one now
you know, you have to play and have some fun with us. :D

I hope you stay a little while. we miss you (whine, whine, whine) ^_^

craaig

Wonderful job. It more than rises to the challenge, it transcends it. LOL

Guess I'll have to take on a differnt challenge while I'm waiting for my 5 words . . .

craaig

Posted: Jun 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol, ya I saw he is very backed up with it Lol!
haha, do you want me to give you 5 words?
have you checked out devilrods challenge to write an ode about yourself? HA! (idea)or else craaig YOU could start a challenge, just remeber if it's too hard they may not do it, or will they???? LOL!!!!

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