MOMENTS....(Haiku)

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Poem By: air
Religion and Spirituality

Tags: unheard, enhanced

hope it's good :) tis about meditation View table of contents...

Submitted: Feb 18, 2008 Reads: 51 Comments: 6 Likes: 11

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moments are unheard

absence of time circumvents

essence is enhanced

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Comments:

devilrod

Yes, stopping time is key. It should be our goal in every moment. I've known certain occurrences where time and space evaporated. How wonderful.

Posted: Feb 18, 2008

Author Comment:

you have? cool! so you will have to tell me more sometime.
my way is mostly through meditation but it happens throughout the day also, since I adapted to capturing moments. I once experienced moving and yet knowing at the same time that it only seemed that way. it only seems as though we are moving because of our perception of linear time. LOL no one will comment now they will all think I am coo-coo LOL! (giggle) well at least I'll still have you. (smile) different times of the year/month/day the energy seems smoother to kinda sink into; do you know what I mean?
well anyway take care, peace and love...katie

gerabel

I love this haiku, Katie! And I'm not just saying that because I like you and haiku a bunch! The opening line just totally grabs me... "moments are unheard" and I'm honestly not sure why other than I feel so many moments in my life have been unheard. Keep writing my dear!!!.....Jerry

Posted: Feb 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh what an awesome thing to say Jerry: 'so many moments in my life have been unheard' Yes I think that is a very fair assesment of how it is and we feel in the end, if only.......?
I would like to be of more assistance to peoples to help them to be able to catch moments you know Jerry because really it is so important....hey, awesome conversation....Thank You!*

Anna Therese

Beautiful haiku - it is difficult to encaptulate the true essence of a haiku but you have done it superbly here. Truly evocative.

Posted: Feb 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Well Thankyou so much Anna, I most appreciate your comment :) katie*

MAmberConrad

Hi, Katie! Very awesome and powerful words. I try to meditate daily. It keeps me feeling so good. And you captured it just right in three short lines!
MA

Posted: Feb 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh do you? that's wonderful! I just LOVE the feel of the energy~take care MA, have a lovely night*

Buttercup

Hi Katie! I really do love Haiku. The simplicity of it with undertones of something deeper. This one was very good. Makes me want to start meditating again! Its been a while since I've done it and I'm thinking it would be good for me.

Love the Haiku!

Posted: Jul 24, 2008

Author Comment:

HEY ^_^ booksie is up and running again YIPPY!

oh yes, meditation, the best cd's for taking you into the state are by Dr. Jerrery Thompson. there are two that I beleive are the best: "Theta Meditation System" and:
"Awakened Mind System" they are EXCELLENT ^_^ lol
yes I love Haiku too, Jerry made them popular here, otherwise I never would have gotten into them.

thankyou Buttercup, hope your night is wonderful
~katie

Pratibha

i absolutely loved this Air...it has that serene feeling of me in a quiet place amidst trees, flowers and nothing around me except love and careless days...drifting waves around my feet...and kriish wbeing taken care of by sanjib...heehee...blissful thinking....

Posted: Nov 17, 2008