To Touch Upon The Path Of Love

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Poem By: air
Religion and Spirituality

Tags: indiscribable, journey

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Submitted: Apr 5, 2008 Reads: 48 Comments: 11 Likes: 8

To touch upon the path of love

where senses meet

and delve into the deep,

indescribable dream

where one is awake

and need not worry

knowing that on his journey

all is sacred.

~~~~~

Once, there sat a dove perched and smiling,

and then he flew into the clouds

to form a story

so you could read the sky

~~~~~

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Punishment

Once, there sat a dove perched and smiling,
and then he flew into the clouds
to form a story
so you could read the sky

Katie, This would probably be the best 4 lines I have ever read!!!! Beautiful! Bravo!! =)

Posted: Apr 6, 2008

Author Comment:

(smiles) ThankYou Punishment! :-)

I like the idea too. Thank you very much ^^ Have a great day! katie*

gerabel

Oh wow! WOW! What a beautiful write, Katie! Just beautiful... nothing more need be said.....Jerry xoxo

Posted: Apr 6, 2008

Author Comment:

(BIG SMILES) that is the only thing need be said Jerry, Jerry (smiles)thank you sweetie ^^

mum55

Katie such a wonderfull write, love then he flew into the clouds to form a story great words and brings simple thoughts to the mind.....peace and happiness to you till later juliet

Posted: Apr 6, 2008

Author Comment:

(smiles) that's nice: 'to bring simple thoughts to the mind' :-) just what the doctor ordered :-)

it is good to hear frome you Juliet, work is boring you say?
you'll have to do something to change that LOL!! maybe make believe? LOL...pretend you are somewhere's else? LOL...
well, I hope you are having a nice time outside of work to look forward to :-)
we'll see you later, and take care, much love, katie :-)

Pratibha

Dove symbolises harmony and the last lines brought harmony back to my mind.Thanks

Posted: Apr 7, 2008

Author Comment:

(smiles) Thank You Pratibha :-)

apodiform

Such simple beautiful words. I love it!

Posted: Apr 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thankyou so much Emily :) I just read your bio, Welcome to Booksie. I am also in the midwest, (Minnesota). yes the winter can go now LOL! I will read your poem and leave a comment... have a nice night, katie :-)

devilrod

Your poetry is so pure.
'where senses meet and delve into the deep', is one of my favorites in a while

Posted: Apr 25, 2008

Author Comment:

^grins and smiles^
ya, I like that too even better now that you say it :-)
kinda sounds mysterious and welcoming :-)
Thankx, you make me feel good this morning! :D

pearlinanoyster

So beautiful and ethereal. I like your use of imagery. Good job, Air.

Posted: May 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Hey, Hello ^_^
Thankyou very much, so very nice of you to stop
~katie ^_^

Pratibha

I came back again ....all ur poems call me again and again to come back buddy to soothe my nerves....thanks Katie

Posted: May 24, 2008

Author Comment:

^smiles and smiles^
yes, well the nerves become tattered from the connections we create when we indulge in drama. do you know what I mean?
we persistantly try to make all things good but in doing so our emotions become entangled in other peoples emotions.
it is as like you hit a chord on a violin and the music begins to play and as it stretches it touches on all the differeent chords. same as with the people, although sometimes we make the mistake of becoming all those chords insted of jsut being with them and allowing them to play. HAHAHAAHAHA I beleive I am sounding very confusing by now LOL! I pray to your nerves: "BE HEALED" ^_^ ^_^ ^_^
"be the stillness of an ocean breeze, feel the gentle waves at ease" "let the calm release be due, and easily feel what's really YOU" ^_^
Pratibha, I have an idea for your discussion table but i will email to you OK? ~ :D

Pratibha

read this again buddy......VERY VERy SWEET one....

Posted: May 31, 2008

Author Comment:

oh, is this the one about the dove? I wish I could see the poem you know? I think we should ask about that. if when commenting we could see the poem that is being commented on you know because what if you don't remember it or the phrase they are talking about?

Pratibha

i need a Dove, buddy...one Dove, whose White feathers would soothe my soul and show me light and peace....

Posted: Aug 9, 2008

Author Comment:

hehehe ^_^ I will give you 3 doves, one for the heart, one for the mind and one for the soul ^_^

say, why are you still up? what time is it there? it is 10:37 here. lol, time for bed lol.
I guess you young people think you can stay up till all hours huh? ahahahahahahahahah teasing ^_^

my friend Kim says she will not have birthdays no more, so sinse I am always 4 months behind her I guess I will not age anymoe either right??? ^_^
oky dokey, we are going to sooth your soul, I will put out the radar to reach you ^_^
I hope you have sweet dreams tonight.
~katie

Nixie

Katie, my head is spinning with this one... my heart say's this about faith?! I could be wrong, but doesn't it go to show how few words can create such a moving piece? I loved this, going to read it again with a brew between my hands. ~ Nixie

Posted: Sep 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Hi Nix, I believe it is to be about the all consuming love of God.
why your head is spinning? lol, is the dove forming a story for you? ^_^ hehe, thankyou so much Nixie, I placed this on featured cause it is one of my favs.
~katie

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