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Untangle My Ghost!!!

Poem By: air
Religion and Spirituality

Tags: ghost, echo, breath, disire, conspire

poem speaks of the tangling of emotions.
LET ME BE, LET ME BE, untangle mt ghost! LOL!!!!!
I hope you guys like it ^_^
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Submitted: May 25, 2008 Reads: 68 Comments: 21 Likes: 15

'Come Hither'

called desire in a cunning like way

as it swoons to conspire

in a delicate way.

*

Intermediate responses

carelessly bought

reality lingers

while emotions are caught.

*

"Who is talking inside me"

Is it truth?

Is it Lie?

"Who is doing the bargaining"

Is it Me?

Is it I?

*

I precariously smile

not speaking a word

hoping my breath

is not seen and unheard.

*

And I can't remember

when the dream did behave

since lately the world

is something I crave.

***

The inner tides coming

drawing out of the coast

"LET ME BE! LET ME BE"

"UNTANGLE MY GHOST"

*

I stood here struggling

A BLEEDING SIGN POST

but now all untangled

AWAKENS MY GHOST!!!!

*

Then underneath all

the motion of mind

sweeps an innocence

pure and sweetly divine.

*

I hear an echo

in the back of my mind:

"Be the breath that moves in"

"Be the breath that moves out"

'it's so simple, too simple

you mean I don't have to shout?'

*

Desire dissapated into the breath

giving a sigh

as it breathed itself into death.

*

But death does not lie there

it raises above

turning something that was

into absolute

Love!

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Comments:

shiningstar

aww i like it

Posted: May 25, 2008

Author Comment:

^_^ ok thanks shiningstar ^_^

seesawmae

aww, this is really really good!

Posted: May 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Hi seesaw ^_^ I mean Mae ^_^

I see you are taking the Lionheart challenge, haha IF he can ever get to you, GEEZ I saw about 62 comments on there just now
Dang! that's alot. haha this may go on eternally LOL!!!
oh I am glad you liked this poem, Thanks for the comment :D
have a good night and hey, good luck when ever you get your words, so let me know ok?

Pratibha

*Speechless and Mesmerised*

Lots of soul stirring to do on my part as well. Loved this one buddy. As usual, soft and knocks us off with subtle expressions

Posted: May 25, 2008

Author Comment:

^_^ haha thankyou so much pratibha, I wonder if I should explain that 'ghost' refers to the 'Holy Ghost'?
maybe some people won't know? it's like when we are tangled up in our emotions we can't sense the inner presence you know? ya, somedays it's harder than others. are you enjoying this Labor day weekend? maybe you don't have Labor day in Canada? we have three day weekend here, so I don't know that anything will be open today?
will be a good day ^_^ take care....~katie

gerabel

I KNEW I was going to find a new poem by you! I just knew it after Lionheart's inspiring challenge. I read it through a second time to let it 'speak to me' and so it did. A lovely poem, Katie... "turning something that was into absolute love" perfectly lovely!! Happy Memorial Day.....Jerry

Posted: May 26, 2008

Author Comment:

^_^ ya, I guess that bump of inspirational challenge paid off LOL! plus it's a long weekend you know? Memorial day and all. nice to relax and stay inside, oh and play a little bit on booksie ^^ haha!
Thanks Jerr!

StrictlyVee

Katie, I love this poem.. My spirit was stirred and my Ghost has been awaken. Beautifully, beautifully written!

Posted: May 26, 2008

Author Comment:

^_^ OH GOOD!!! ^_^
Hi Vee I am so happy that it made you feel good.
is no better food than spiritual ^_^

Urja

I could so relate to this! Love it! I'll have to explore more of your works soon.

Posted: May 26, 2008

Author Comment:

^_^ giggles....yes I so love your writing also
we have much in common ^_^

Isabelle08

wow. That was just so... amazing

Posted: May 26, 2008

Author Comment:

^_^ Thankyou Isabelle, you are very sweet!

Classy Peach

Helloooo Kitty...I mean Katty...I mean Katie...I'm just slightly unfocused after watching your writing jump in leaps and bounds.

Come hither verse: So luring, like words that are spoken when holding someone's hand and you sigh. And so, you've invited us.
Intermiediate response verse: Bought...good word selection, as we tend to sell ourselves when falling in love (perhaps) and you slowly contemplate your future, or what you want...like shopping.
Who is talking verse: Well, mugosh. did I just use my outside voice? Was my heart just singing through my words?
I carelessly smile verse: when life offers us extreme goodness/horrors a select few people will wade in the water and contemplate why? why me? why now? why here?
And I can't remember verse: this is a very soft poem Katie.
The inner tides coming verse: The incredible phenomina of someone who helps you heal or creates a cathartic moment for you.
The underneath it all verse: Woop! You just let the back of your brain wonderland take over.
Desire disapated verse: a mosquito bite seen as a bee sting. OR or or...the final scene of love making.
But death, last verse: Free wheeling good timing choruses of hope. Yep, you just wrote about the Conception of Hope. We all have it.

Now, that is how I reacted when reading this divine literature. Am I on your thought path or do I just have a really charming imagination???
You rocked this poem and I look forward to more please.

Posted: May 26, 2008

Author Comment:

LOLOLOLOL! Yes you are mostly correct! haha Wow ok most usually no-one undrstands LOLOLOL! I mean they do in thier own way but I rarely think that full understanding is there LOL! but that's ok it's good that people can take with them something or ANYTHING at all huh?

hahaha ya the come hither is so luring it speaks of the desires I have that take me away from my true callings (oh-well sigh) LOL I am only human (aw shuchs!) LOL!
and yes 'bought' because I by into those thoughts alot and justify thier being there.
I so like how say contemplating your future like shopping ^_^
because indeed it is just like that, only it is WHAT THE HECK DO I WANT? LOLOLOLOL!!!!! and my focus is not centered as much as it should be. so is what leads to 'the misbehaving dreams' who is talking inside me? is it my ego centered self or is it my higher conscious (superconscious)
I had the word 'precariously' smile instead of carelessly (I mean that is the word that came to mean) but I couldn't at the moment remember what exactly it meant so I went with carelessly. I kinda know but not completely you know?
the inner tide to me means the movement of awake consciousness that has been unable to move because of conflicting thought patterns and egoic emotions that have been strangling the voice of spirit. and the healing yes.
so, when the 'ghost' or holy ghost is untangled from the conflicting emotions then it can be heard so to speak. and yes that is the hope and with that then the lower desires can be raised uo into the breath and be transformed so to speak HAHAAHHAHAHA oh my this is long, I think I just lost myself....lets see where did I go.....hmmm ok here i am
yup and the love thingy HA much too long a tale LOL!
a story in it's own right and is my ultimate demon LOL! but I guess I love my demons too ^_^ after all we can't fight them or they'll just get bigger lol!
Thanks so much sweetie :D I love you for all the banter (conversation) ok then, I guess i better get going~
see you later or sooner ^_^

MAmberConrad

Very beautiful and romantic.

"LET ME BE! LET ME BE"

"UNTANGLE MY GHOST"

Amazing.

MA

Posted: May 26, 2008

Author Comment:

LOLOLOL!!!! ya, I like that part! I laughed when it came to me LOL!
"let me go, let me go' LOL!
Thanks MA, you are a dear ^_^

Punishment

=]

Posted: May 27, 2008

Author Comment:

:D (chuckles) Thankyou Punishment ^_^

Scribblings of a middle aged mad man

Lovely, conjures a warm stirring in my soul....

Posted: May 27, 2008

Author Comment:

^_^ Hi Phillip, haven't seen you for a while.
Hey if you are interested in joining a discussion on self realization, Pratibha has suggested I do chapter one in her new opinion article. well it's not exactly what I had in mind but we'll see you know? well, I invited your brother sinse he knows much on the subject. if you wish to check it out you can get to it via the front page.
thanks for the warm sentiments.......~katie

Constantinos Grigoriadis

But death does not lie there

it raises above

turning something that was

into absolute

Love!

Excelent*****
Great work Katie !!!

Posted: Jun 1, 2008

Author Comment:

^_^ *big smiles* I am happy that you liked this one :D

Anna Therese

I agree with all of the comments above - someone said mesmerizing, someone else said soft - I find it gently lilting and beautiful and clever too! "untangle my ghost" - love that! Can I be awfully pedantic and ask if "comming" is meant to be "coming"? (I am awfully finicky with spelling and typos though make plenty of my own) I really love this poem Katie and I'm sorry to be the one to pick out one little word when the content and feel of the poem is so stunning.

Posted: Jun 1, 2008

Author Comment:

HAHAHAHAHAA oh-no that's fine, reminds me of my mom, she finds them instantly! ya that's great! Thankyou Anna, anytime, anytime! I will have to look up the word 'pedantic'
haha what I really need is a dictionary, words come to me that I have a slight clue of but need more indepth recognition of them.

Mind Sight

WOW! Very impressive piece of work! I really enjoyed reading this and it has a wonderful flow. I wish you well and God Bless. Lisa

Posted: Jun 2, 2008

Author Comment:

^_^ Thankyou Lisa, let today be full of many blessings to you. God-speed ~katie

mum55

Hi Katie this is a lovely inspiring poem of beauty, really enjoyed the simple flow.....outstanding as always........here is hoping your well love and peace to you Juliet x

Posted: Jun 3, 2008

Author Comment:

WHAT! NO Hello, I'm glad to be back, so sorry I worried you all half crazy. Yes for all we knew you could have been eaten by a tiger!!!! heheheheheheheheheheheheheh

JULIET!!!!! where have you been? it's been what? about 20 years or so Lololololol! muahahahaha! ok so, what have you to say for yourself?
Sorry Juliet, haveing a little fun at your expense. ok I'm all done. (sigh) ^_^ SO GOOD TO SEE YOU! ^_^
yes we sent the rescue crew out to find you but they never came back (silly giggling laughter)
yes, they NEVER came back! hmmmmmm......

haha I am just thrilled to see/hear you haha we missed you :)

ok, love, love, and more love, ~katie

devilrod

Ah yes, the air that I breath.
heehee
A grand fable with beautiful metaphor.
I just read 'The Alchemist' by Paulo Coelho.
Have you read it?
It's a beautiful, grand fable like this poem.

Posted: Jun 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Really? No I have not, but I must! I know I was reading something sinse (I always am) lol, don't know off hand what it was, maybe Ekhart Tolle? well most of the books I read, discuss seeing through the illusions of the ego/lower mind
and getting rid of the barricades: (anger, pride, envy etc etc)
I just read your challenge.....You are certainly a challenging one! ^_^ see you soon ^_^

bubbly

hi! katie. u ended it well with love. as much as death is a reality, LOVE too is (supreme). lol ;-)

Posted: Jun 6, 2008

Author Comment:

hehe, yes ^_^ Thankyou Bubbly! Love, the ultimate reality! ^_^ yes, have a very nice weekend! ~katie

PhoebeMiller

Impressive. I enjoyed your poem.

Desire dissapated into the breath

giving a sigh

as it breathed itself into death

Everything comes back to the breath, is carried away...into Love...Peace.

Posted: Jun 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Ohhhh, thankyou Phoebe ^_^ Yes, isn't it wonderful?
carried up into the stream of love. nice to have you read and comment. have a nice night ~katie

anusha

Lovely is the word!.. the best thing about all ur poems is that they r so simply written without the use of some tough lexicon..n still they set the meaning jst right!. u rock! i mean it!

Posted: Jul 2, 2008

Author Comment:

^_^ really? wow, thankyou so much!
I guess I don't use tough lexicon cause I don't know what it is lololol!!! well thankyou so much though anusha, i am surprised that you can get my poetry right off the bat cause so many have a tough time with it I think. I mean they kinda know but not completely you know? But then again maybe that's what is good because you can take from it in the way that it makes sense to you you know? I love reading poems that can contribute to different meanings you knwo? sometimes you see many people taking many different meanings away from a poem, cool. hahaha, well anyway I thankyou again
anusha, and hope you have a fantastic fourth of July.
~katie

JLC420

Ok first let me say I don't know why I liked it. was it the flow the simplicity or was it just a line or 2? I don't know I just know I liked it and throughout it
this part stuck in my head:

"Intermediate responses

carelessly bought

reality lingers

while emotions are caught."

I don't exactly understand it or nor pretend to but it sticks in my head. Thanks a lot another thought I need lodge in there...lol
Excellent Katie purely Excellent!!!
Peace Love and Understanding

Posted: Jul 19, 2008

Author Comment:

hahahahahha, thanks Matthew ^_^
ok, that line to me speaks of resposes we have, and how we react to them; do we react with our lower emotions or with unconditional love? there is where you will know which is the small ego and which is the higher. and also to learn how to listen less to the emotional one. or better yet, learn how to go beyond it by understanding it ^_^ so reality lingers while your emotions are caught, because indeed they are caught and such is how we feel until we see through them.

sometimes for me there is this whole learning process that takes days to go through until the answers come. I wrestle so to speak with understanding but mostly it is the time that eventually does it. ^_^ at present, I am going through a milder set of emotions connected to an ongoing learning experience and growth. hahaha it is exciting and frustrating at the same time lol...
peace Matthew, see you soon ~katie

JLC420

ok I think that is why I liked this piece. Once I think of what you say in your response, it is more clearer to me... I think your respnse is a poem in itself with the way it flows.
Thanks Katie
Peace Love and Understanding
Matt

Posted: Jul 20, 2008

Author Comment:

gosh, I sure wish we could see the resposes, because I am trying to remember and I kind of do but not completely.
its like we need to have two sites up at the same time lol.
thankyou matthew, I'm glad I could make it easier for you, I know that I don't clearly speak tot eh majority at times, and some of the poetry comes from hard to understand places.
peace and love to you too as well ^_^
~katie

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