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Submitted: Apr 27, 2008    Reads: 192    Comments: 12    Likes: 5   


Your love is pure

Your love endures

Your love reassures

Your love restores

 

Your love is around me

Your love astounds me

Your love is addicting

Your love is everything

 

When my tears rain from my eyes

And the pain is deep

I cling to you

Because you’re all I need

 

When I can’t stand

And my heart is weak

I find myself in your arms

Because you are my strength

 

You are everything to me

You are the reason for my heartbeat

You are the reason for this song I sing

You bring so much joy to me

 

You are air to me

You allow me to breathe

I need you near me

Wipe these tears from me

 

I look to you Jesus

You reign above Jesus

You are King Jesus

And I love you Jesus


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geminicmy
geminicmy

Praise God.

Posted: Apr 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Always!

MAmberConrad
MAmberConrad

Very emotional. Well written. Yes, without Him in our lives, we are nothing.
MA

Posted: Apr 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you for commenting. Without Him we aren't anything, but we are conquers with Him. Thanks again.

rickyengland
rickyengland

Reads like you meant it. Romans 1:16,17

Posted: May 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you. Straight from my heart. Thanks again for reading.

StrictlyVee
StrictlyVee

I'm feeling this poem deeply. Love the way you give Him the Glory. Absolutely Beautiful!

Posted: May 7, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm glad it connected to you. Hav to give Him glory in all that I do. Thanks for commenting.

Wandiola
Wandiola

AMEN! love it! that should be a christian song! God never fails! please read my poems and the first two chpater of my novel chrysanthe!

Posted: May 14, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you very much! i actually wrote while i was listening to music! but i'll be sure to check your work out. thanks for commenting

bubbly
bubbly

u must be deeply in love. ;-)

Posted: May 19, 2008

beyond clarity

hey man,me again. dont wana be negative but are you married? struggeling to find the link between 'your love is...' and 'mind sex'. maybe you could enlighten me on your views about the grace you live under. i myself am a new creation in Christ and have come to learn about what is pleasing in the Lords sight.

Looking forward to your reply.

sweet

Posted: Jun 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol naw not married, but thinking about asking her...but "Mind Sex" is a mental stimulation...more on the lines of a deep comversation, instead of physically stimualting me, stimulate me mentally with your intellect. You learn about a person when you sit and really talk to them. This is on the lines of praising God for who He is and what He has done in my life and how He makes me feel. My poetry really doesn't have a connection with each other....my inspiration comes from my imagination, life experiences, and my views. And its always good to meet new Christians. A litle advice, being new to Christianity, surround yourself with Godly people and people who are going to keep you motivated and help you grow in Christ because there is a lot of stuff in this world that can really redirect your path. You have to always be in prayer and be encouraged because this walk isn't easy at all. I was baptised when I was 9. I'm 21 and just now really understanding what I committed to. It's a struggle....can't lie, but you have to have faith. Keep God in all that you do.

angellynn
angellynn

Glory Be Thy Name,
Great job my friend.
Your poem has touched heart,
Thank You, keep writing.
Bless you, angellynn.

Posted: Oct 14, 2008

Butterfly2008
Butterfly2008

That was awesome!

Posted: Oct 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you!!

craaig
craaig

I love the way you praise him. A hymn for all of us.
It sings!

craaig

Posted: Oct 30, 2008

Sister Sabbay
Sister_Sabbay

Brown skin,

Wonderful piece of writing ! It's so exciting that we have a Messiah, Christ Jesus, who can save us from sin, permitting us to Overcome this corruptible world. Encouraging all to focus on Christ, the Scriptures, The WORD (John 1:1-14), teaches us to cast all our burdens upon the Lord, as His yoke is easy and His burden is light (Matthew 11:30).

Sabbay :)
AdventistWheat.com

Posted: Nov 1, 2008

The Encourager

Well done. I can relate. He is my everything.

Posted: Nov 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you for reading. He's my everything also. I am nothing and can do nothing without him.



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