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A beautiful, autumn moon, tonight,
within the celestial sky.
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Submitted: Oct 18, 2007    Reads: 67    Comments: 1    Likes: 1   


I Walked With Him.

A beautiful, autumn moon, tonight,
within the celestial sky.

Astral projections, like gleaming arrays of diamonds,
an Aurora Borealis rippling across the sky.

The moon's pristine rays, light a prominent path,
across the majestic sea.

A path I could take,
if I were Jesus.

I've walked these beaches for many years,
but this was the closest, I felt his presence.

What a lovely night to walk under,
this beautiful, autumn moon.

A walk I take with God.


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i like ur piece of work.. well done

Posted: Oct 18, 2007

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thanks was written for a contest with pic prompts



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