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"No, the light, It's something only we can find ourselves. It has no meaning to other people besides ourselves...
The light could be human, object, or even ' god' . It's 'The truth behind the Truth '
It's only intangible to those who think it is.
It Exists not only in the mind, but in the heart."
-a friend who always saw more than two solutions life's true happiness being the tunnel . View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 28, 2007    Reads: 61    Comments: 4    Likes: 0   


When  will  I  find  that  light  to  replace  this  ever  remaining  darkness ?

Why  can't  I  find  that  light  anywhere  in  this  tunnel ?

How  could  I  not  see  the  answer , unknown  to  all  or  none ?

No  matter  how  far  or  how  long ,  this  tunnel  rages  on .

No  matter  how  I  try ,  this hope  of  the  light's  existence  fades  away .

Without  warning ,  all  have  come  to  try to  find  this  light  as  well

What  decade ,  have  they  spent  to  find  that  which  does  not  exist ?

The  tunnel-as  it  trembles  and  fades , 

not  even  a  light  to  be  seen  anywhere .

In  the  darkness ,  that  dreadful  darkness , 

where  many  have been  forced to  rest , to  search  you'd  think  they  were  possesed ,

What  terror  filled  when  this '  light  '  weren't  literally a  light ,  nor  inanimate  object ,

But  a  simple  solution , that '  light '  ,  a  God ,  a  dear  friend ,  of  myself  ,  or  perhaps-

the  answer ,  the  rest ,  the  tunnel's  end ....


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I really like this.Your style and depth and descriptiveness goes well together.

Posted: Jul 28, 2007

Author Comment:

It wasn't really poetry , but thanks for reading and reviewing !!


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not really poetry huh?
i really liked it, i dont do poetry myself, but there are those things that go into the category; other.
Thanks i like this, a life search, whatever it may be is an endless tunnel.

Posted: Aug 1, 2007

Author Comment:

ha ha ! Thanks so much for reading . Alright , so it should be in the ' other ' category ? Thanks for the help !

Wow this poem was deep. It had me thinking alot. I love it! ^^

Posted: Aug 12, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks ! Next time , I'll try even harder .

Poem or not this was superbly well written. It made me ponder, it made me dwelve into my inner thoughts and that I do not do very often. I just love your writting style, the details put in every description really makes it so much better than a poem.

Posted: Oct 30, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks again ! I really appreciate your comments ! nice to know your opinions .



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