There is no such thing as absolute darkness
Even the blackest nights have a light to shed.
So beautiful

Keep writing about the good news, little sis.
Take care :)

Posted: Jul 28, 2008

Each stanza/line resonates with deeply felt emotion and evokes similar emotions in the reader.

I love the brilliant insights here. Well-chosen pics add to the vividness of visual, aural and tactile descriptions.

Very well-written.

Posted: Jul 28, 2008

hi! chicka. believe in Him and trust in urself and u'll sail through. yo! liked it. lol. ;-)

Posted: Jul 29, 2008

Dedication after dedication.

first one to human-being second one to God.

what else i tell about????

As i have said earlier this is comes from your experience, true and transparent.

thanks for sharing your emotions.

Posted: Jul 29, 2008

Hi Mandy ^_^
I like this, I have often thought of life as a maze myself. I like the way you brought this from pain, darkness, crumbling into tears, strength and light.
keep on shinin' YA! ^_^

Posted: Jul 29, 2008

Life is a maze I don't want to get out. Nice, but I don't really trust in him, cuz if he does exist, he is crap. No offense I hope.

Posted: Jul 31, 2008

Life is a maze indeed. We don't seem to know our way around it. There are lot of bumps and turns and thorns and holes. Nothing is what it seems. We are always heading toward uncertainty. But what makes the journey wonderful is---We're not alone. Faith is wisdom. ^^

A soul-uplifting piece. I love it!
GodBless! :-)

Posted: Aug 1, 2008

Another great and beautiful poem from ya chicka! I love how you put so much emotion and feeling into this one. It really lets it feel "real" and organic. I truly believe that you have a talent, and I hope you share more great works like this with us as you sharpen it. :) Take care, Regan

Posted: Aug 3, 2008

Oh i love it oh i love it it made me cry tears of joy oh my gosh keep writing about the Good News!!!

Posted: Aug 5, 2008

beautifull :)

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

wow, that was so beautiful! you expressed the emotion amazingly! :)

Posted: Sep 8, 2008

great job, this was a very well writted poem, i love your writing style. the word usage and imagery was superb, this made my day. seriously, im not just saying things.
one question: your tlaking about god in that last passage right? just making sure
darkness in tenacious, but all it takes is one little candle to beat it back.

Posted: Sep 23, 2008