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Submitted: Aug 23, 2008    Reads: 50    Comments: 4    Likes: 1   


Peace now.

Rest for a while.

Your thoughts are black

Don’t fade away.

I need you…

Turn to me

Take my hand.

I’ll lead you home.

I know you’re scared

But trust in me.

You’ll be okay.

You’re afraid you’ll fall.

But I’m here

And I’m ready to catch you.

To help you back up.

We all stumble.

We all get confused.

Trust there’s help.

Don’t give up hope.

Never let go of the last thread.

Rest now.

There’s a long journey ahead…


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Stupid thing.... Changed my fomat and I couldnt fix it... >=/

Posted: Aug 23, 2008

There's always hope Mandy, good work

Posted: Aug 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Of course. Thanks brian. =)

Really inspiriting poem. Great job Mandy.

Posted: Aug 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Alek. =)

Beautiful Mandy; is it for a freind?
~katie

Posted: Aug 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks katie. And no it's not for a friend... Just something I randomly wrote I think... Though... I didnt write it with someone in mind... hmmmmmm I think Alex needs this... like he'll ever read it or even care, but whatever. Thanks for reading katie. =)
~Mandy



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