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About the only man I can trust for my life. I love Him unconditionly. He's amazing. =) View table of contents...

 

Submitted: May 15, 2008    Reads: 66    Comments: 11    Likes: 5   


When I feel alone and lost,

Someone is always there.

 

If I’m upset and scared,

He’s always there to comfort me.

 

When I feel myself falling,

He’s there to pick me up and set me on my feet.

 

Should darkness surround me,

I know He’s there to Light my way again.

 

He forgives my mistakes,

And shows me the right path.

 

If I need a friend,

I know who to turn too.

 

He’s always there for me,

Even when it seems He shouldn’t be.

 

No one can love me more than Him.

Because His love is unconditional.

 

He is everything.

Without Him I’d be nothing.

 

He gave me life,

And now I’m living for him.

 

He is the Lord my God,

He is amazing.


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Yes, and this is an amazing tribute to Him Mandy.
He definitely loves u sall no matte who we are, or what we have done... He is Love itself.^^

God bless, mandy.^^

Posted: May 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Punishment. I love Him so much and He's given us me so much. You're right He is love itself. thanks again and God Bless! =) Mandy

Nice piece Mandy

Posted: May 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks Brian. =) Mandy

Beautiful. Your words are inspiring, I love how I can relate! I'll be sure to check out more of your stuff:P

Posted: Jun 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much! I'm so glad you can relate to this! I was really hoping people would. =) Mandy

Harry Rensby
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Awareness beyond the "normal" three dimensions, and especially of the Beneficent, is a great attribute in life. Bless you.

Posted: Jun 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much! And Bless you as well. I truly appreciate this comment. =) Mandy

this one poem made me ur fan buddy....please keep me informed about all ur new posts.....

lovely faith and flawless soul....

Posted: Jun 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much Pratibha. I'm glad that I have a new fan. And I'll try to keep you informed. =) I doubt I have a flawless soul, but it's sweet of you to say so. God Bless. =) Mandy

AMEN! With God all things are possible.

~DarkFairy~

Posted: Jun 9, 2008

Author Comment:

God Speed! Thanks DF! =) Mandy

See I came back again....this one is so serene...and divine...

Posted: Jun 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Pratibha. I'm so glad you liked this one. =) Mandy

WHOOP WHOOP.

this piece is a piece of art..
its awesome
with a captal AYE

your very talented =]]

Posted: Jul 3, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm so grateful for this comment of yours. You put a huge smile on my face. I'm really sick right now, so smiling feels amazing. Thank you. =) Mandy

this is so true and yet its such a beautiful poem. writing is your gift so don't stop or i"ll haunt you lol kidding :P but keep writing though. :)

Posted: Jul 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Well I'm not sure I would want you haunting me. lol. Thank you so much for your sweet comment. Dont worry, nothing could make me stop writing. =) Mandy

hi Mandy,
I have read your poem and find good simplicity.Your poem
become mile-stone to anybody during his life journey.
In short abstract for living life.Nobody can give up hope
during life if he remember your poem.
Astu...

Posted: Jul 5, 2008

Author Comment:

That has to be one of the highest compliments I've been given. Thank you so much. =) Mandy

I like it, God is the best!

Posted: Aug 13, 2008

Author Comment:

He is truly everything! =)
~Mandy



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