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Submitted: Aug 29, 2008 Reads: 51 Comments: 4 Likes: 1
Plunge me into the icy water
Drown me of all that’s evil
Let me soul be free…
Free of sins.
Take my hand and guide me
Back to the One who created me.
Show me the way it should be.
Let the light surround me.
Let it soothe and comfort me.
Will I be a part of this one day?
A heart full of emotions never shown
A mind full of words never spoken.
Can I feel them here?
Can I say them now?
Lead me to a new home
My true home.
On day in later years;
Show me where my Father lives.
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hi mandy,
Again great emotion reflects in your poem,yet you have complained as you said...
can i feel them???? why???
thanks for sharing such emotions
ASTU.......
Posted: Aug 30, 2008
You don't have to worry about where you'll end up. If there is God you believe in, you're going to Heaven. Don't worry about it.
Its a great poem,you really keep showing your love towards Him.
Posted: Aug 31, 2008
loved this poem too! loved it! i love everything you write though!
Posted: Sep 8, 2008
wow, that was great. a fantastic poem.
Posted: Sep 23, 2008
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