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Please dont think you're alone

Poem By: Chicka19
Religion and Spirituality


At first I wasnt sure what I was writing about. My brother or friends? The more I went on, I knew it was about God. Please know you arent alone. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 18, 2008    Reads: 59    Comments: 7    Likes: 5   


Never forget the times we had together.

Don’t wipe away the tears that were shed.

Love every moment that we had.

Smile at every mention of my name.

 

Forget the bad times in your life.

Remember all the good.

Take the lessons you learned.

And put them to the test.

Day after day.

 

Believe in all you believe.

Don’t let anyone say no.

Have faith and never let go.

Sing praise to our Father.

 

Ask the questions I know are still there.

I’ll try to answer them.

Tell me the thoughts in your head.

I’m always listening.

 

Don’t believe what you know are lies.

Always seek the truth.

Never go down the dark path.

Never think you can do this alone.

 

Look up and smile for me.

Do what you love.

Never regret what happened.

You are you today because of it.


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Comments:

Nope never alone, when I feel uncomfortable or afraid, I just turn up the music, like when I went to my job interview, I wasn't certain how to get there, and I just turned up Casting Crowns and knew I would get there just fine.

And I'm really not alone when I have such a great family :)

~DarkFairy~

Posted: Jun 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Exactly what I was aiming for. hehe Casting Crowns... u know that's almost creepy... I'm listening to them right now! No one is alone, yet so many feel that way. I hope this helps those people.... some way if only a little. Thanks sis! =) Mandy

Mandy, it's a beuatiful poem and you can tel how it turned from talking to your brother to talking to God.
you inprint such deep messages of faith.
~katie

Posted: Jun 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Awwww thank you katie. Faith, God, all of it... It's me. It's who I am and I love it. I love being God's daughter, I love knowing that he's there if and when I ever need him. =) Mandy

Mandy, this is really beautiful :)

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

awwww Thank you. I'm glad you think so. =)

This is really beautiful, as others have already said. None of us are alone, no matter how much we feel that way..this is a very timely poem for people out there I'm sure, including myself. Amazing job.

Posted: Jun 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you. I'm so glad that you got what I was trying to say in this. I'm glad you liked it. =) Mandy

Hey I like this piece more or less right now for me. It brought tears to my eyes.Like others have said you never are alone. whether you are physically or not the is a higher presence watching over each of us. I say presences because we do not know whether male or female. Either way each turn we take is for a reason and we are guided bu that reason.
Thank you for the tears they need help to come with the way I am feeling at the moment.
:')
Peace Love and Understanding
Matt

Posted: Jun 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much Matt. I'm so glad you liked this. No, i know we are never alone. but then again I didnt write this for me... I wrote this for all those who feel they are alone. Thanks again. =) Mandy

lol I cant spell :P

Posted: Jun 25, 2008

Author Comment:

lol it's okay. I knew what you were saying. =)

Hello Mandy[chicka19] a beautiful poem indeed...giving courage to the lost-defeated souls...impressive.
Rahbar1.

Posted: Jul 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much Rahbar1. I'm glad you liked it. =) Mandy



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