xxI will keep on fightingxx

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Poem By: Dark Skylight
Religion and Spirituality

Tags: sky, love, god, fighting, dying, heart, soul, hurted, bad, people

I will try to live this hell. View table of contents...

Submitted: Sep 27, 2008 Reads: 48 Comments: 4 Likes: 4

When the sun goes down,

and my last tear falls.

When the night comes

and my face turns black

the demon will come out.

My soul is already

hurted enough.

I dont need you anymore.

I dont need anyone.

I will keep on fighting all alone.

I will keep on dreaming,

about my day when I will be up there.

With shiny angels I will sit.

With God I will talk.

I will ignore everything bad.

I will never be afraid again.

I will be with my love.

I will feel safe.

Bad people wont hurt my heart anymore.

Rotten hearts wont stab knives in my back anymore.

Justice will come one day.

I will keep on fighting till the end.

Even with no one by my side.

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Comments:

Matthew

That is the same dark place I have been living. I so much of me in your writings. It's very beautiful. I have felt like I will meet my love in the after life. A lot of your words I have spoken to people all around me. That is so beautiful, and I feel exactly the same. Hope we may stay in touch, and don't change that beautiful person that you are.

Posted: Sep 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Yes,I hope you will find your love.And Thank you for this beautiful words.I hope you'll be alright.And if we feel the same,I hope too that we'll stay in touch.I wont change my personality,dont worry,lol.Thank you so much.
:)

viper

I liked this poem.It has its dark side to it.Just remember you are never fighting alone.You always have God on your side fighting with you.There is also your guardian angel by your side.Great job once again.I enjoyed it.

Posted: Oct 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you for those beautiful words.I will try to think of that.
:)

an0nym0us

its dark but encouraging

.x peace

Posted: Oct 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so muuuch for reading!
:)

dennishardy

look into yourself it all there, you don't need a slip of paper to tell you, you understand. I'm at the age when I don't need confirmation that I can communicate, I am what I am, you don't have to love, or even like my work, but it's what I am. I began my writing in 1970 and I believe that satisfaction is in your mind. I am satisfied with my writing

Posted: Oct 20, 2008