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Submitted: Apr 11, 2008    Reads: 85    Comments: 5    Likes: 3   


I stand on the rugged rocks before You

My body and soul bruised and torn

I have no hope left without You

I pushed You away and fell

How many times have I said

that I'm broken inside

I cannot fix myself

I cannot right the wrongs

My open wounds stare You in the face

My blood flowing mixing with my tears

My flesh has taken over

destroying my life, hurting You

I cannot say sorry enough

The words will never do

I stand on the rugged rocks

ready to jump

I hear Your voice

a still, small voice

I feel the cool breeze

sweeping over me

Healing my wounds

drying my tears

Forgiving my wrongs

and helping me stay strong

I will never understand

why You love me so


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What are the bounderies of love, if any.

Posted: Apr 11, 2008

Author Comment:

True. Thank you Poewhit.

Powerful poem.

Posted: Apr 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Anna

wow, this was really good!! I really enjoyed it! I could really understand the feeling, kind of know it myself, but the ending isn't something i know! very well written, enjoyed it a lot!!

Posted: Apr 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank You Seesawmae.

Hi FunnyBunny :) like Anna said: 'powerful'!
both powerful and moving! - katie

Posted: Apr 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Katie.

In our times of weakness, we are given enough grace for each day. Thanks for drawing my attention to your poem, and I look forward to reading more. Ricky.

Posted: Nov 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Ricky



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