Excellent write, so very true. I really liked this part,

" To bear physical pains And undergo humiliation,
To pray for the ones, Who scorned Him "

Again, great write, I really enjoyed this.

Posted: May 29, 2008

hi! if. he cared for us that's why he is lord. he died for us that's why he remains in our hearts. heart-warming. lol. ;-)

Posted: May 31, 2008

I am full of admiration for the way you express your faith in today's material world.

Posted: Jun 4, 2008

Very true. I like it.

Posted: Jun 5, 2008

IT IS EVIDENT FORM YOUR WORD CHOICE HOW MUCH YOU CARE FOR GOD. I LIKED THE MEANING OF EVERY VERSE, KEEP IT UP. IF YOU NEED MY HELP LET ME KNOW:)

Posted: Jun 6, 2008

If you work on keeping your beats persistent throughout the poem it would make it easier to read.

Posted: Jun 9, 2008

it spoke to me and it was very good! keep on rocking! lol!

Posted: Jun 10, 2008

I loved your poem very much.

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

So true and full of grace!
i enjoyed reading it!
Keep it up!

Posted: Jun 12, 2008

i dont personally put much stalk in religion... but i did like this poem. it has a good flow.

Posted: Jun 12, 2008

It reminds me a little prayer. :)) My mother will like it. ;)

Posted: Jun 27, 2008

Really beautiful poem. :)

Posted: Jun 28, 2008

Really Good.I Think You'll Like My Poems Titled "He Cares" And "Gods Love". Feel Free To Read Them.

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

i never realised that I had missed this one....

I was really upset with the bomb blasts in India and was thinking - is there a end?

this poem soothed my soul....

thanks LUNA

Posted: Jul 27, 2008