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Can You Really Love Me So?

Poem By: jjbreunig3
Religion and Spirituality


A love poem, conveying the importance of communication. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 11, 2007    Reads: 64    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


Inexplicably, my presence invokes your smile
in instances of pure and uncontained joy.
Can You Really Love Me So?

I dare not ask this question aloud –
fearful that you won’t confirm our union.

Being together is magical for me;
each shared moment illuminates my life
with Hope’s brightest light.

I dare not ask this question aloud –
Can You Really Love Me So?

Our natural chemistry is a catalyst,
igniting passion that comes from…
Simply gazing on your immortal smile.

I must be crazy to imagine
that you would have me around,
nourishing me with your spiritual essence.

Can You Really Love Me So?
I am willing to learn…


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Comments:

jjbreunig3:

Well written. Nice message of spiritual and ethereal love and emotion. Liked it.

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Posted: Apr 11, 2007

Nice... real honest emotions expressed..well done:)

Posted: Apr 12, 2007

Author Comment:

Hello Leesah - Thanks for your kind feedback. This is my second "love poem" that I've attempted. Take care. --Joe



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