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Prayer Scented Incense

Poem By: jjbreunig3
Religion and Spirituality


An inspirational poem of Christian Faith. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 13, 2007    Reads: 60    Comments: 1    Likes: 1   


Do you realize?

After birthing heart-felt prayers,
have you seen them rise as sweet perfume?
For their glorious scent fills God’s nostrils
as His Presence consumes Heaven’s throne room.

Do you know?

Our Father covets this sacred incense,
that burns in the cries of His Children.
He is forever mindful of us
and our continuing battle for overcoming sin.

Do you want answers?

Christ Himself hears our pleas directly –
No phone operators are standing by.
He desires daily conversations with us
until the day when… we join Him on high.


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Comments:

jjbreunig:

Enjoyed this one as well. Nice theme and presentation.

Recommendations:

1. Space and pace the frequency of your postings to find and build your following and readership more slowly and surely.

2. Add a different photograph or picture with each posting. They are good eye-catchers for attracting new and current readers.

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Posted: Apr 13, 2007

Author Comment:

Okay; thanks for the advice. My tendency is to avoid pictures/graphics, so that the reader is forced to develop their own mental image.



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