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Submitted: Apr 17, 2007    Reads: 72    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


Foolishness of Jehovah
exceeds the wisdom of Mankind;
torture by crucifixion
was to serve as a deterrent
to stop all forms of crime.

Inhumane treatment
demonstrates insatiable blood thirst
in a vain attempt to bring out
the best character of man
by placing World’s justice system first.

However, death of the Innocent Lamb,
a perfect sacrifice God did decree
to bridge the gap of sin
using Man’s worst punishment
in a twist of spiritual irony.


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jjbreunig3:

Well written and expressed message of forgiveness and redemption.

Most timely as well. Sad to say. Hope this speaks to the minds, hearts and souls of those who, desperately, need to hear it. It's in God's hands now. Good work.

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Posted: Apr 17, 2007

I was glad to see you entered. Your entry is very deep and completely true. Thank you for sharing. God bless!

Posted: May 8, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks for your kind words.



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