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Submitted: Apr 13, 2007    Reads: 50    Comments: 1    Likes: 1   


Unfinished is the fine tuning of me,
as I perform in this human drama,
which is covered by a spiritual mystery.

Participating without a script,
I’m stumbling forward in a lifelong excursion,
although I’m not fully equipped.

In this paradise, that’s known as Earth,
I’m a curious child of wonderment
and working towards my supernatural rebirth.

Despite my growth of understanding,
I will always be an adolescent boy of His –
Forever dependent on God (while I’m here living).

Unfinished is the beauty of my tapestry
until I can achieve the final conclusion
that is… Permanently me.


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I admire your well stated poetry---Life is certainly a tapestry and we weave it day by day--thanks for such a beautiful way to share it...

Posted: Apr 14, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks for your feedback and encouragement; life is quite the journey. --Joe

Learn more about me and my poetry at:
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