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This is one of favorite poems.Some of this I might be the only one to understand, some other stuff only religious people will be able to understand. Good luck! View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 27, 2008    Reads: 60    Comments: 8    Likes: 4   


We take what’s hard and we don’t give back

We follow no man, and pick no slack

We fight with our words; we can resist

And through pain and torture we will persist

Mad, were labeled; the slaughtered lamb

But that slaughtered lamb saved us: the damned

We don’t fight back to prove the points

We are the body, we move the joints

Labeled weak, we throw you our guns

Meek: our hands, for we are his sons

Why do you not understand?

No-you can’t you live for the land

We are the sacred battalion, trained with supremacy

Yet we stand to you, and there shows clemency

You do not know us, yet we know each other

Each woman a sister, each man a brother

We are your enemy, yet again your friend

Of course you don’t get it so I call this the end

Who are we? You ask before I go

For you see me act, and you think you must know

 

I laugh and smile and show you my hands

Ah, yes, I know…you don’t understand


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*tear* *sniff* I think its very beatiful...-.-pretty sad I gotta comment on my own work as soon as I post isnt it? O.O it makes me feel special!

Posted: Jul 27, 2008

LOL! I loved it also! :-)

Posted: Jul 27, 2008

Author Comment:

haha thank you so much!

Dang! I really loved this ^-^

Posted: Jul 28, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks lol ME TOO >>>>>>......

Believe me, this poem is almost alive and anybody can feel this... look... it is moving... it is singing with sacred passion... it is soaring.

Schizo..

Very good work!!!!

Posted: Jul 29, 2008

Author Comment:

haha thank you so much i really appreciate it!

WOW I love it! Fully puts into words our standing in the world. Hopefully non-Christians will start to understand....I am so sorry it took me so long to take a look at your stuff. Have you seen mine?
BTW, my name is Kati

Posted: Aug 2, 2008

Author Comment:

haha thanks yeah I know lol ill be sure to check it out hold on ill put it in my planner....

AHHHHH!!!! This is awsome girl! U are an amazing poet! This is a very beautiful poem and the emotion in the senario is as powerful as the message.

Beautiful job CHAN chan! : D
Loved it!

~Sarah Rain

Posted: Aug 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Yw thanks

hehee, i clicked the "'Like It'" Button! Just 4 YOU! : D

Posted: Aug 13, 2008

Author Comment:

*rolls eyes* lol thanks

coolio its definsensive and daringly out of the blue. and also it is very bold. I like it.

Posted: Aug 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Yay! lol thanks.



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