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I can not explain the awe of the God that I believe in. So, in this poem I don't try. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Nov 1, 2006    Reads: 145    Comments: 5    Likes: 1   


No Words come to explain you
No Words can completely contain you
No view or place that you made
No time or power that came,
and went, like the passing of stars
So majestic and grand.
They are a pinprick compared to you.

No Words.

Not even these.


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Again whoah, normally I hate religious poems cause they always seem the same(jesus is great blah blah blah, which i know anyway), thankyou.

Posted: Nov 3, 2006

Author Comment:

jesus is great. Thanks for the comment!

JESUS ROX MY SOCKS OFF!!!!!! i totally agree with u, i tried describing him to my friend but i ddnt know enough adjectives, i know alot lol

Posted: Aug 23, 2007

Author Comment:

Exactly! He does indeed rock my sock off as well.

Lovely

matmoo

this is good. I really enjoyed it.

Posted: Feb 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks for commenting! I'm glad you liked it.
matmoo

Really good! I suggest to do it a bit longer.

Posted: Aug 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you! I'm not sure what words I would use to make it longer though.... :)
matmoo



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