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Submitted: Jun 29, 2008    Reads: 32    Comments: 2    Likes: 2   


lions,the majestic predator looking for his prey...

Haiku

The awesome lion

sits, waiting stalking its prey

suddenly attacks

Haiku

the patient lion

watches through half lidded eyes

"awake"he is not 


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Comments:

like it alot. i have troiuble writing haikus but u did good :]

Posted: Jun 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks for the comment!!!

hi! n. these haikus r an apt description of the majestic animals lions r. there is sheer beauty and magnetism in this poem. immensely likeable. keep it up. lol. ;-)

Posted: Oct 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanx!



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