lions,the majestic predator looking for his prey...
Haiku
The awesome lion
sits, waiting stalking its prey
suddenly attacks
Haiku
the patient lion
watches through half lidded eyes
"awake"he is not

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Submitted: Jun 29, 2008 Reads: 32 Comments: 2 Likes: 2
lions,the majestic predator looking for his prey...
Haiku
The awesome lion
sits, waiting stalking its prey
suddenly attacks
Haiku
the patient lion
watches through half lidded eyes
"awake"he is not
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like it alot. i have troiuble writing haikus but u did good :]
Posted: Jun 29, 2008
hi! n. these haikus r an apt description of the majestic animals lions r. there is sheer beauty and magnetism in this poem. immensely likeable. keep it up. lol. ;-)
Posted: Oct 24, 2008
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