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Submitted: May 26, 2008 Reads: 41 Comments: 3 Likes: 2
Oh dear God,
Grateful I am to you;
For giving me a chance to live in this amazing world;
For giving me shelter, clothes, and food;
For giving me the family and friends.
Oh dear God,
I struggle for freedom, peace, unity, and love;
Let you be my guiding light;
As I offer my life to you, Oh Lord. Amen.
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I read alot of poemz, but if i recall, i think u were the first 2 make a poem about thankz 2 god. I like thiz poem, i give it 10 out of 10.
Posted: May 28, 2008
God is wonderful... Can't believe so many people saying He's selfish. Thank you for the poem. Really beautiful:)
Posted: May 30, 2008
hi! phyllz. this is the prayer v all've on our lips. thank god for a good work. lol. ;-)
Posted: Jun 13, 2008
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