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Submitted: May 26, 2008    Reads: 41    Comments: 3    Likes: 2   


Oh dear God,

Grateful I am to you;

For giving me a chance to live in this amazing world;

For giving me shelter, clothes, and food;

For giving me the family and friends.

Oh dear God,

I struggle for freedom, peace, unity, and love;

Let you be my guiding light;

As I offer my life to you, Oh Lord. Amen.


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I read alot of poemz, but if i recall, i think u were the first 2 make a poem about thankz 2 god. I like thiz poem, i give it 10 out of 10.

Posted: May 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you!. actually, I was at church when I thought of the poem. anyways, thanks again!

God is wonderful... Can't believe so many people saying He's selfish. Thank you for the poem. Really beautiful:)

Posted: May 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you!. God is not just wonderful, he's amazing.=]

hi! phyllz. this is the prayer v all've on our lips. thank god for a good work. lol. ;-)

Posted: Jun 13, 2008

Author Comment:

yes, your right bubbly. thanks for reading!=]



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