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This poem describes how Jesus, my Lord and Savior, is always there for me whenever I need him. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 12, 2008    Reads: 46    Comments: 3    Likes: 3   


When I’m not strong,

He lifts me up.

When I’m alone,

He lifts me up.

When I can’t take another step,

He lifts me up.

When I’m sad,

He lifts me up.

When I need help,

He’s always there.

When I need somebody to hold,

He’s always there.

When I need a friend,

He’s always there.

When my heart is breakin’,

He’s always there.

No matter what,

No matter where I am.

My Lord Jesus is always there,

Ready to lift me up.

 

 

 

 

 

 


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Comments:

Nice prose but i was kind of expecting a rhyme excellent contact and i'm pleased that jesus is in your life right now a friend in need is a friend indeed.

Posted: Aug 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks for commenting!

wonderful job girl! And it is sooooo true,
""in a time of pain,
he is always there,""
its true it's true as well!
(hehee, i wrote my own little tid bit!! lol : P)

Beautiful piece!
[claps]

~Sarah Rain

Posted: Aug 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much! I'm sooo happy that you liked it!♥

beautiful...absolutely beautiful...so filled with honestly and emotion.
You relasionship with God is strong and I admire that! Keep up the good writting...oh, and p.s, I just posted a new poem called "you" if you could please read and comment:P
Steph(:

Posted: Aug 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much, Steph! I'm glad you really like it, and I'll do my best to write more great poems. I will read your new poem ASAP, as well.♥



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