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a poem about being a christian View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Feb 27, 2008    Reads: 58    Comments: 4    Likes: 3   


Lord i thank you for saving from the depths of the ocean

for without you  i would have been in the belly of a fish

just like jonah

Father God  thank you for  bringing me out of the wilderness

i praise you for rescuing me out of the mouth of a lion.

Lord God  i'm grateful   to you  for bringing out of my darkness of sin

for now i see the light  Jesus Christ

Lord Jesus  i love you   for dying on the cross for me

for without it i would have died of starvation

in my drought  of sin and inquity

and Holy Spirit

send your rain  to earth upon me

for i'm thirsty for your water


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Cute. I liked it.

Posted: Feb 27, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you

aww, it seems so much like a prayer. Um, is it safe to say there's a grammer error in that line that speaks of darkness and sin? add a "me" after bringing and it's fixed. well, i liked it. Very well written and it reminds me of my faith, which i forget so easily

Posted: Feb 27, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks i'll check out the erorr when i have time

cute poem

Posted: Mar 8, 2008

Author Comment:

THANKS

God bless u for such a wonderful poem :)

Posted: May 19, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you



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