Oh, that is so beautiful! I loved that you chose a topic that anyone could relate to; the Lord is a great topic to do a poem about. Beautiful, and love that this poem is saying that the Lord should come, because America isn't looking to great right now. Good work, keep it up! =)

Posted: Jul 29, 2008

Wow, that was deep. I really liked it. Great job!!!

Posted: Jul 29, 2008

um hi im not christian and dont beleive in god so um yeah if god were real i think hed help you already or maybe you guys are destroying his "creation" we call earth and hes pissed off at you guys and wont help you if i were a god and had a planet i wouldnt help the people if they were recking my planet i created for them to live in. but thats just my opinion...

Posted: Jul 29, 2008

That was nice!, you are a wonderful worshiper of the Lord. Congratulations! Keep it up, you are in the right way.

Posted: Jul 29, 2008

Awsome its amazing, will you try out some of my poems? Mainly "we are the christians" though.

Posted: Jul 29, 2008

wow this is good it really reflects your faith...i loved it, it deep and amazing!!!
xoxo
DOM!!
XD

Posted: Jul 29, 2008

Well done! Lately I've noticed people speaking out more on bringing Christ back into the lives of Americans, I've been waiting for this for a long time.

Posted: Jul 29, 2008

It sounds like a lost child crying for the hand of her father... you have invested so much emotion into it...

God must be listening.

Posted: Jul 29, 2008

Renn:

Well written and most inspirational! Most prayerful as well. Gave it an "I Like It" vote.

If you intended this as having more than just 1 verse, it would help the reader if you were to repost this with a line skipped between each verse. Just a thought.

If you have not done so already, please read and rate my postings entitled:

1. "Excitement Inspired.....",

2. "Our Grampa Ed",

3. "Love Intended: #1, #2 & #3",

4. "Limerick For Life",

5. "The Spirit",

6. "More Powerful Prayer Regimen",

7. "POEMS" &

8. "Here To Stay".

Thank you!

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Posted: Jul 30, 2008

I really liked this one, it's sadly true :( a good read :)

Posted: Jul 30, 2008

This is really good.

Posted: Jul 30, 2008

Thanx everyone 4 the nice comments!

Posted: Aug 3, 2008

I don't want to be mean, but...
as puddleofink said, USA's factories have the worst effect on Earth. And your laws protect them even when they throw radioactive waste in your rivers. That's true, even if all the american citizens deny it.
also, nuclear power plants are not the best way to attract his holyness in order to help. Nuclear bombs are quite bad and kill people. Big- G, if he exists, doesn't like that.
why do you christians think that everyone is christian? For exampe, you say: 'America has lost you' as if all america believes in the same god!

- I don't want to attack your expresion, but... you see.

Again there are nobody-knows planets with living creatures (mathematically proven). Why would that superbeing you call god sent jesus on this one? The basis of christianity is kinda ...rusty?
Christians who allow idiots to rule the world and start wars are not better than the worst satanist.

Posted: Oct 15, 2008