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Resting in the knowledge that I am God's. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 29, 2007    Reads: 48    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   


Rays of golden sunlight
warming my face
a hallowed presence

The bird's song,
trickling sweetness into my soul
a triumphant benediction

The blossom-laden trees above
sheltering my spirit
a mighty chapel

The gentle rustling of verdant leaves
hand of God on my heart
a silent promise

reminding me...
He has never left
and never will


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touching i love the last stanza

Posted: Sep 1, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you justme!
SN

really beautiful, clean simplicity, great choice of words - inspires a real sense of peace and calm in reading it.

Posted: Sep 4, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you Rauna. This one is my favourite! Funnily enough this was inspired by the warmth of the sun coming in through my window at work one day- but the whole "setting" was based on the place where I got married - a beautiful, peaceful chapel in the woods - so many moments of my past and present intermingled together in that feeling of absolute calm! Glad you enjoyed it! Stay in peace.
SN



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