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Submitted: Sep 6, 2008    Reads: 61    Comments: 8    Likes: 6   


How do you live when you don't have a HEART OF LOVE.

How do you feel when you don't lift your praise to the ONE ABOVE.

Why do you want to remain FAITHFULNESS.

Why do we ask God for FORGIVENESS.

What do you see when you lift your head up HIGH.

Each morning, why do you lift your head to the sky and SIGH.

Why do you think he look down at you with a SMILE.

why for a love one,you think you could run for a MILE.

why to the the bad guys we gave up our VIRGINITY.

why don't we tried to win some pride and DIGNITY.


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I really like this, you present your point in a very invetive way!

Posted: Sep 30, 2008

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thanks

SUch an honest poem. Keep up this great work...way to go...

Posted: Sep 30, 2008

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thanks for the support

Nice poem very Philosiphical

Posted: Oct 4, 2008

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thanks

Nice, amazingly these are some of the questions I ask my self each morning...

Posted: Oct 4, 2008

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thanks.

These are all perfect questions that I think we all ask, and answers even though we know them, we brush them away, because most of us never want to know. Apart from being blind or inconsiderate of ourselves and feelings, I think we are guilty of knowing the truth, knowing something and still doing it. Still going ahead when our mind and soul tells us NO.

Sighs* I hope we all stand up for once, for ourselves, and those who can are blessed.

Posted: Oct 5, 2008

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we are guilty of knowing the truth, knowing something and still doing it.I hope we all stand up for once
thank you.

You have a very good poin that should be pointed out to alot of poeple.Abby

Posted: Oct 29, 2008

I bet these questions are asked by everyone, i do. I think i know some of these answers but really we all do but some people are just blind. Brilliant poem. :)

Posted: Oct 30, 2008

Shattered,

Well written poem, as it was indeed encouraging that we must have Faith, as without it, it is impossible to please our Creator (Hebrews 11:6). We must prepare for God's imminent return.

Sabbay :)
AdventistWheat.com

Posted: Oct 31, 2008



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