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For some reason, death just came to my mind last night, and this poem couldn't get out of my head. My sister says its bad luck to write a poem on death as it means you are soon dying, I don't think so, but either way, we are still going to die someday, and I really like this piece, hope you like it too. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 15, 2008    Reads: 77    Comments: 9    Likes: 4   


GONE!


Cry not for me when I die

Call not upon your tears of anguish

For away from this decadent world I will have gone

Into a better place far beyond


Weep not for me when am gone

Call not upon your broken heart for answers

For just a portal away I shall be waiting

For the finger of judgment to cast its call


Wail not for me on my departure

Faces of sorrow do not carry with you

For a better place, we are told, awaits me

If by the ways of the cross I had lived


Sing not praises for me on my last day

Make no hymns in my name to be sang forever

For my actions on earth were not worthy of that

And my speech and my deeds were further from equal


Pray not for me when am gone

Call not unto the lord for special favours

For my destiny I had already shaped while on earth

I made my bed and I must lay on it


Cry not for me when am gone

Call not upon your tears of anguish

For to a better place, it is said, I am gone

And who are we to believe otherwise.


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Comments:

Nice work. Don't know what the poem is called, but the first line runs

'Do not stand at my grave and weep, I did not die I only sleep'

Check it out...........yours is just as good.

Brings much the same feelings as your work.

Phil

Posted: Jul 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah, I remember reading that...it is by Someone called Mary...can't remember the last name. Always thought it spoke volumes. Thanks for the comment Phil. Take care

Nice work, Deb!! The angels are awaiting us writers and poets, don't you think?!!! But I don't think we're ready yet to join them so they're just going to have to wait a bit!!! LOL Enjoyed reading this piece very much. Happy days of writing and reading.....Jerry

Posted: Jul 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks a lot Jerry...the angels await, indeed...:)

i'm not afraid of death either. i know it is a better place and whatever we have right now is just temporary but it still a blessing and live most out of it. great poem! i love it! c",)

Posted: Jul 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks Chello....acceptance of death is a pretty big step, but an essential one too.

this one sure is not unlucky ...this one is thought provoking and shall i say "LOVELY"?

I loved it...and I know we all have to die...i would prefer to die when i am still able to do my own work...what say?
hee hee...look i have planned also...

U know what my Granny used to say that 'those who commit suicide, their souls never reach angels, One should never commit suicide and instead enjoy this beautiful life since there r many who want to live but don;t get a chance.."...so true...ask someone who wanted to live and could not due to many reasons...

didn't i say this is thought provoking...??

promise me that u would keep me informed....okay??

Posted: Jul 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks for the comment Pratibha...and yeah, will keep you informed when I write more...take care

runereader
(not registered user)

From Angels dark the wings of death
Are laid upon my door of pain..
Fear not the soul, nor spirit die..your ashes rise again!...runereader 2006

William says Dee "you is one good writer"!

Posted: Jul 16, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks a lot Billy

This is a good piece of work Deb, well done!

Posted: Jul 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks a lot Brian

Irene
(not registered user)

Good work Deb........Why did you think of writing such a piece .........its makes me afraid..........You know I fear death.

Posted: Jul 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Hahaha, well, fearing it won't make it go away...lol....may even bring it closer. It just came to my head while I was stuck on a Jam in Thika Rd...si you know how those can be so long and annoying....so my head got busy. Nothing to be worried about.

Okay, i'm amazed! This is just... I'm speachless (that's a hard thing to accomplish). wow, keep it up!

Posted: Aug 9, 2008

Author Comment:

hahahaha...you've got me speechless too now! Thanks so much!

Deb, I could tell this poem was well thought out.. Beautifully written! I agree with you when I'm gone; I don't want nobody crying over my shell of a body or making me out to be the saint that I wasn't. I only wish that they would pray for the ones that are still here, because I'll be in a better place. Thank you for sharing you art.

Posted: Aug 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much for reading...and for the wonderful comment. This poem is one of my favourites. :)



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