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Hey this poem is just some random inspiration i had while trying to write one night...enjoy:) View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 16, 2008    Reads: 28    Comments: 2    Likes: 2   


beautiful you are
swaying back and forth
back and forth like an
old rocking chair
in perfect harmony
with the world
back and forth you sway
controlled by your God
the wind that powers you
without the wind
you will not sway
you will not move
your freedom vanished
your beauty gone
without the wind
without your God


you are nothing


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Very nice, I liked it. I did one on the flag as well, it is acrostic, F. L. A. G. Check it out when you get a second. Take Care, Ted

Posted: Jul 16, 2008

Author Comment:

Okay I sure will! Thanks so much for commenting :)

Stirred patriotism inside me as well...yes, we love and owe so much to our country...right?? Our mother land....our love...

Posted: Aug 8, 2008

Author Comment:

yes....you are absolutely right! you are amazing...thanks soo soo much for always reading and posting your thoughts to my poetry....u r awesome! :)



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