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The Abyss Will Gaze Into You

Script By: FallenAngel117
Religion and spirituality



A recently deceased man becomes the guest to Death, but must return to the land of the living in order to prevent his girlfriend from commiting suicide to "join" him.


Submitted:Dec 11, 2010    Reads: 69    Comments: 0    Likes: 0   


The Abyss Gazes Into You
Cast
Vincent- A recently deceased young man who doesn't remember how he died; he is stuck in Purgatory as a guest of Azrael, the Angel of Death, who questions him about the nature of life; wants to convince Azrael to send him back
Azrael- Death incarnate, who waits to bring people to their eternal resting place, either Heaven or Hell; cynical, sarcastic, yet philosophical, Azrael finds humans to be "funny little creatures" and enjoys conversing with them
Scene 1
INT. DARKLY LIT ROOM (LATER REVEALED TO BE PURGATORY)
The film opens with an extreme close up of a human eye. The camera slowly zooms out to reveal the dimly lit face of VINCENT, a timid young man, dressed in simple white clothes. The camera fully zooms to show him nervously lying on his back, looking around. The rest of the room is dark, except for a small dull light off to his right. Cut to a shot of a rather simple table situated in a corner of the room. There are two chairs on opposite sides, facing each other. The light itself is emanating from two candles placed parallel to each other on opposite sides of the table. In the chair farthest from the audience sits an unrecognizable figure. Only the person's hands and feet can be seen. From what can be seen the figure is dressed completely in black. In the center of the table sits a folder with a pen next to it.
Cut to a long shot of Vincent sitting up for the first time. He finds his glasses next to him and puts them on. Looking around, it is shown on his face that he doesn't recognize where he is. His observations are interrupted by a raspy yet smooth voice coming from the table.
Unseen Figure
Well c'mon, I haven't got all day.
Startled and slightly confused, Vincent gets up and nervously walks towards the table, constantly looking around trying to get a hold of where he is. He timidly sits down at the table; the unseen figure opens the folder and begins to question him.
Unseen Figure
Name?
Vincent
(Struggling to find his voice) N… name?
Unseen Figure
(Sarcastic) You have a name don't you?
Vincent
Y-y-yeah… (Thinks a moment, then shakes his head)
Unseen Figure
(Gives an obnoxious sigh) You're a fountain of useful information. (Reads out of the folder) Vincent Toze, age 18. 5'7", 120lbs, eyes blue, hair brown. Time and date of departure: November 15, 2010 at 8:35pm. Time of arrival of the deceased: November-
Vincent
Deceased?
Unseen Figure
Deceased. Passed on, gone to meet his maker, dead. They all mean the same thing kiddo.
Vincent
Who's deceased?
Unseen Figure
You're kidding me right?
The figure turns the folder to Vincent. To his horror, Vincent sees a photo of himself, as well as mortuary photos and photos of a tombstone with his name on it. He frantically looks through the folder then tosses it aside.
Vincent
What kind of sick joke is this!
Unseen Figure
Suddenly you found your voice.
Vincent
I'm not dead! I'm here living and breathing right in front of you! Where am I!
The unseen figure draws a large revolver out of his coat and aims it at Vincent. Now frightened Vincent backs up with his hands raised. Suddenly the figure fires on him. Instinctively Vincent cringes backwards with the effect of the "bullet". After a moment, he straightens himself back up, looks down, and sees he isn't touched. The figure lowers his weapon and laughs slightly.
Unseen Figure
What an interesting creation the human soul is. The body can be mangled, cut, shot, burned, etc. But the soul… the soul cannot be touched. It is a pure object, incapable of being harmed. (Vincent looks at him quite confused at this point) You're not the first one I've had to convince. Here if you don't believe me. (The figure removes a bullet from the cylinder and tosses it towards Vincent on the table. Vincent examines it and concludes that it is a real bullet.) Better get used to it kiddo it only gets harder from here.
Vincent collapses in the chair out of shock. He puts his hands in his head for a moment before looking at the figure.
Vincent
Who are you?
The figure picks up one of the candles and waves it in front of his face as he talks. It is during this monologue that the audience truly sees the face of AZRAEL, Death himself. His face is a silver color, with darker shades of gray in chipped spots, almost as if his skin has been chipped away like on a statue. His left eye is a golden color while his right is red. He wears a Fedora on top of a head of medium length black hair.
Azrael
I was with Adam and Eve when they realized the extent of their mortality. I gathered up the lost from the fields of Gettysburg and brought as many as I could to their final place. I watched men bring each other down in a hail of bullets on the beaches of Normandy. I collected the unlucky innocents scorched by the flames of Vietnam. I was called when people were struck down in Afghanistan. They say… when you stare Death in the face, your life flashes before your eyes. So tell me Vincent Toze… what do you see?
Vincent
You are Death…
Azrael
I am YOU'RE Death, Vincent. At least, the closest thing your feeble human mind can come to realizing. I am one of an old few. Those who still remember called me… Azrael.
Vincent
Azrael… why am I here? Or rather… where IS here?
There is a brighter amount of light within the room. In the now brighter room, it is revealed to be a small chapel, with various pieces of furniture. Azrael moves and sits in a large pew. As the lights came on the table and chairs disappeared.
Azrael
Here is Purgatory Vincent. The Place of Waiting. Contrary to popular belief it is not Saint Peter who judges where people go, it is I. Normally I could just cycle through you humans faster than a census. However you, Vincent, are a very interesting case. "Why am I here?" I ask you the same question, why ARE you here kiddo?
Vincent
Isn't it your job to tell me?
Azrael
I could, but this is vastly more entertaining. Let's examine the facts. You were one of the most successful students in your school, friend to everyone. Even had a lover. (Mocking memory loss; he obviously knows the answer to this) What was her name?
Vincent
(A sorrowful whisper) Ella…
Azrael
Ah yes. Now it seemed you had everything great. But something happened, something someone missed. And thus, here you are, in the place where time means as little to me as it would to an insect.
Vincent
How long do you plan on playing mind games with me Azrael?
Azrael
How long do you wish to keep me entertained, Vincent? Oh perhaps I should mention one thing. (Azrael snaps his fingers and a small portal appears. Within it is a picture of ELLA, Vincent's beloved. She is kneeling at his grave and crying deeply.) Your dear beloved isn't fairing too well. Rumor Topside has it she's heading in a bad direction and is eager to join you… if you get my drift.
Vincent
Are you threatening her!
Azrael
Not at all. In fact I am slightly… sympathetic to your plight. I will answer the questions you have, if you shall answer mine. Come with me human, I have something to show you.
End Scene
Scene 2
EXT. THE PATH
The scene cuts to Vincent and Azrael, now outside along a winding path. Vincent is slightly confused by the quick change in scenery.
Vincent
Where are we now Azrael?
Azrael
The Path. The Road of Decision. I have taken many a soul down its length, had many a discussion with them. But no matter the outcome, the standing rule is a decision must be made. Walk with me Vincent Toze.
Vincent
What decision is that?
Azrael
To go forth with their final plans in the afterlife, or to return to the place of what you would perceive as the living world. (Vincent puts a hand on his shoulder to stop him)
Vincent
You've let people go back…
Azrael
Let me explain. I have given them the opportunity to go back… if they have a pure conscience. Many have gone back on their own, without my consent, and as a result… you mortals have what you call "ghosts", the poor few who never listened. So I give them an opportunity for a choice.
Vincent
You give us a chance at redemption? Doesn't seem very profitable to one who deals in the dead.
Azrael
(Laughs) Clever boy. Do you have a question or don't you?
Vincent
How did I… die Azrael? I don't remember anything wrong.
Azrael
Ah interesting answer. What is one of the leading causes of departure for human beings? (Vincent shakes his head) Cancer. (Sees his shocked face) It was undiagnosed, brain tumor. You didn't show any of the symptoms so no one noticed, until it was too late of course.
Vincent
Why don't you wear any religious symbols?
Azrael
Why should I? It doesn't matter if you're Catholic, Jewish, Buddhist, etc. Death is all the same to me. Now I pose one for you.
Vincent
Azrael what is it going to take to let me go! Ella shouldn't be forced to go through this!
Azrael
My dear, dear, Vincent I told you that time means nothing to me. You're precious Ella isn't going anywhere… immediately. But if you are so eager to find her well… (He pulls a silver half dollar out of his coat and flips it) Heads, you answer the one question that has plagued me for eternity and I'll let you go, tails you stay here.
Vincent
You would put things like this to chance?
Azrael
What does a doctor tell a family when a loved one is seriously injured? They have a 50/50 chance. Everything revolves around chance. The chance of winning an award, finding the love of your life, even cheating me. Chance rules life and death. (Looks at the coin, smiles, then back at Vincent) Why is it that humans value life so highly, when you know I'm only going to catch up with you in the end?
Vincent
It's love. Love is what binds people together; the feeling when you look at someone and know you want to spend the rest of your life with them. Love is what keeps people alive, and what keeps them together, even after they have passed on to you. Love conquers all, even Death.
Azrael
(Thinks a moment) Come with me.
Vincent follows him down the path towards the "Heaven" route. Cut to Vincent looking around at now a still graveyard. Azrael is standing by one particular grave and motions him over. Curiously, Vincent walks up and looks at the name on the tombstone.
Vincent
Its blank…?
Azrael
A blank tombstone holds no purpose for me, once its… occupier has addressed their business. No one resides here, at least not anymore. (Vincent looks at him, surprised) I believe you have a young lady to go see. Hurry home Vincent.
Vincent stands up, smiling crazily, and shakes Azrael's hand before running down the street. Azrael shakes his head and walks behind a tree. The scene dissolves to Azrael sitting in his chapel again.
Azrael
"Love conquers all, even death." I will never understand human beings. (Opens his hand, to show the coin on tails) "Battle not with monsters lest ye become a monster, and if you gaze into the abyss, the abyss gazes into you." Cut to black.
On the screen appear the words "60 Years Later…". The end scene opens from black to Vincent, now very old, laying on his deathbed, alone. Out of the cornor of the room, Azrael appears and walks up to the sleeping Vincent. Vincent opens his eyes and smiles.
Azrael
Hello my friend.
Vincent
And to think… I thought I'd gotten rid of you. (Laughs)
Azrael
Ella is a lovely young women. She's waiting for you, if you are ready.
Azrael holds out a hand carefully to his friend, and Vincent gently takes it. Extreme closeup of this. Cut to black.
End




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