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THREE WOMEN (Working title)

Script By: Raine Carosin
Religion and spirituality



(This is my imaginary story of Man and how he wanted a companion and got Eve, or, the First Woman. And how men through the ages have chopped and changed with their companion, not being wholly satisfied, and how the women, evolving into a “woman” who “in her time” “changes the course of history… (his story)… First, Eve does the wrong thing, then the next woman cannot keep her place, and then the end of the world, and then the angelic woman, then the cries from hell, then her lonliness, and then her “song…”) (It's unfinished, as there is a lot of room for more improvement - if you want to use it, please contact me so that I may have a copy of your additions to the work)


Submitted:Mar 11, 2013    Reads: 16    Comments: 0    Likes: 0   


(This is my imaginary story of Man and how he wanted a companion and got Eve, or, the First Woman. And how men through the ages have chopped and changed with their companion, not being wholly satisfied, and how the women, evolving into a "woman" who "in her time" "changes the course of history… (his story)… First, Eve does the wrong thing, then the next woman cannot keep her place, and then the end of the world, and then the angelic woman, then the cries from hell, then her lonliness, and then her "song…") (It's unfinished, as there is a lot of room for more improvement, but I leave this in your hands to see what you can come up with.)
MALE: I'm so alone
I feel so empty
I need something
Perhaps it's company
Ah, what is this
I have not heard it before
Has it got form
Will it come to my door?
Woman: My love, my love
Come and see what I have found
It a tree and it's fruits are
falling to the ground
Come and taste
this sweet delight
Turn my Day
Into Night
My love, my love
Come and see what I have found...
MALE: Look what she has done
She has blotted out the sun
She's shared forbidden fruit
I do not want this coot
Woman: My love, my love
Come and hear what I have heard
Its a rumour and it is sweet
And it's going all around
Come and hear
this sweet delight
Turn my Day
Into Night
My love, my love
Come and hear what I have heard
MALE: What is this I hear
What is this sweet delight
What does she bring
Will she please my sight?
No, she is wrong
To talk so much aloud
If I wanted a chatter
I would've ordered a crowd
Is there another
Who would appease my soul
It really doesn't matter
So long she makes me whole
Woman: My love, my love
Come and see what I have found
It's the end of all we know
And it's making a crying sound
Come and see
this frightful Night
Could it be
a sweet Delight
My love, my love
Come and see what I have found
MALE: Thank Heavens' she is gone
Not again will I complain
She brought the end to me
The end, and so much pain
I think something else
Might take the place of her
To ease my constant boredom
Please don't make of her a cur
Woman: My love, my love
Come and hear what I have heard
There a life hereafter Death
For us all, even the bird
Come and hear
This sweet delight
turn my Days
Into Nights
My love, my love
Come and hear what I have heard
MALE: She was nice
She was dear
But I didn't make myself
…clear
They're all the same
They don't make sense
They all speak
…Nonsense
Woman: My love, my love
Their taunting hurts me so
I know that I was wrong
To turn away and go
My love, my love
Won't you feel
this sweet delight
My love, my love
My Day and
My Night
MALE: Take her away
Leave me in peace
I need to think
Don't give her release
I am done
I am done
I have taken quite enough
All I've ever needed
Was to love and be loved
WOMAN: My love, my love
I know now what you need
It's always been there
Yet you refused to heed
Could you have loved yourself
And your brother any more
Could you this time give love
So that I can be sure
For I, like you, long to love and be loved
By a Man who knows Love
And it seemed to me
You didn't love your Maker Above
So in guessing the next line
Am I wasting my time
By trying to be perfect
And waiting in the line
MALE: They're all the same
They've wrecked my life
I think what I wanted
Was really - a wife
Woman: My love, my love
I was there from the start
I was made from your mind
I was made from your heart
All this turning away
And blaming me so
You can't honestly blame me
When I turn away and go
MALE: She is gone
She has left
Oh what have I done
She was half of my soul
I should have treated her as One
Now how do I start
To win back her heart
Or should I concede
To the Light
I was wrong
And she was right
Women: My love, my love
Without you there's naught
My life with your lonliness
And sorrow you bought
I couldn't please
Not at all
Like an idol
I had to fall
My love, my love
That is all
MALE: I know not what to do
To help the likes of you
You didn't help me much
All I needed was your touch
Perhaps you can find
A companion for your mind
For such as I need you not
And it's better you're forgot
What is that I hear
It's her singing in the breeze
She has found something to do
And I can do as I please
She inherited the wind
She inherited that space
She inherited a lot
But she is not in the race
MAN & WOMEN My love, my love
How perfect you are
I can gaze at your form
Like I gaze at the stars
But you're far, so far away
I can touch your face no more
My love, my love
You've evened the score




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