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It is a yarn I spun just to test story technique at the character introduction phase.

Submitted:Jun 27, 2013    Reads: 7    Comments: 0    Likes: 0   

Phase I Story Writing

Jesus Walked. He Loved. He Saw. He Forgave. He sometimes thought about letting his heart freeze over and abandoning his sacred mission, but then he remembered all of the faces of all of the people he'd seen on his travels. He saw the healed bones, as he saw the healed hearts and smiles. He was organically linked to humanity, and so to let them all be snuffed down by the coming darkness was paramount to giving himself a slow and shameful death. Deaths like this were much more than the Christ could bear to live with. Meditation over.


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