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10 ways to know Your falling in love.

Article By: DiscoveredDream
Romance


Okay, I uploaded this when I was so wasted it wasn't even funny, And you know... it's not true, just messing around to get some stalker laughs. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 18, 2008    Reads: 167    Comments: 12    Likes: 1   


#10 - When you get a phone call from the person you adore the most you will repeat the things they said in your mind over and over again, even if it was a simple hello.


#9 - When his friends call you - you will talk to them like they are the gods because they know the man you love so well


#8 - You'll try to call him - get to the point of dialing his number then chicken out and write down on a piece of paper what you would say if you had enough guts


#7 - When walking in the halls you will stand a little taller just to see him


#6 - You will try you're best to get a piece of something that touched his body just so you can smell him and never wash that item.

#5 - Eventually he'll come to you're locker or you're door step and give a simple hello, in which you will start to produce something to say back but it comes out like some crazy word/form of a word for him to take in, which makes you blush a deep red.

#4 - So when you get enough guts to call him he actaully says he 'digs' you. You drop the phone, write down the exact words, & Don't sleep just so you can get up an extra hour early to get ready so you look nice, then find you are an hour early for school so your stuck sitting there but still screaming in your head. You will shake and repeat exactly what your going to say in your head over and over again only to figure out that you never actually say that, just feel like your going to vomit.

#3 - You will act all cool, and 'accidently' drop your books just so he remembers he called you that night. He'll write on a torn piece of paper to Call him. But you never actually do.

#2 - You'll start listening to slow love goo goo songs, having You & Him on your mind the whole time
#1 - You'll wait online all night just to hear him say hello
#0 - When you talk to him your heart will beat faster and faster with every word that comes out of his mind
When you were reading this he was the only thing on you're mind.
06 - 17 - 98' first time you walked into my life. The last word that came out of your mouth.
06 - 17 - 08' Engaged after 10 years of knowing each other, the best 10 years of my life.


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LOL! This is so true! I LOVED this! Great job!

Posted: Aug 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks Jfm. I'll enjoy reading some of your pieces in the next few days.

Anna
(not registered user)

This is terrible.

1. There is no such word as "eachother." It's two words. "Each other."

2. Can you not see what's wrong with these: "you're heart will beat faster" and "the only thing on you're mind" Are you in the second grade? That's the only excuse for not being able to tell the difference between "you're" and "your."

3. Capital letters are not decorations. Capitalizing random words is stupid. Again, if you're out of the second grade, you should know this.

4. Do you know how to use spellcheck? Obviously not.

5. "*Friends*" "the man you

Posted: Aug 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Aww, Thanks so much.!


Anna, shut up. just because some of the grammar is wrong dosent make it horrible.
I loved this poem-it's all true. :)

Posted: Aug 19, 2008

Author Comment:

I have to admit.. Even being in college I suck at Spelling. Grammar isn't my strong point xD

And The other one doesn't bother me much.

Thanks for commenting Wolf

-DD

cute and funny! but true for everyone at some point! :]

Posted: Aug 19, 2008

Author Comment:

I just tried to keep it kind of 'I love them because..' stuff ... Then based it off of my High school years with my girlfriends.


thanks for Reading.!

-DD

i adore this!

Posted: Aug 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks Alice.!


Keep Reading and Sharing.

-DD

aww its sweet.

Posted: Aug 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks .! =}

Keep writing.!


-DD

This sounds like an unhealthy obsession more than love. There's nothing about actual communication and knowing each other. There is more to love and life then simple obsession.

This makes me think of those clingy girls who refuse their boyfriends to have a boys night and to do what ever they tell them to do and get jealous if he even looks at another girl and makes a huge scene if he talks to one. I'd be insulted if anyone acted like how this poem towards me. I'm a person, not some meat you can lust after and say you "love".

And number six is almost stalker status.

Posted: Aug 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah. I just said that in my comment to another person. It was just a goofy post. Not something I expected to get all great comments on. Really, when I made this My whole mind was back in the 90's, Elementary, Junior school. It was just a joke but I like negative comments as well.

Awww... How nice!

Posted: Aug 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha, Thanks Torn. I thought it was a goofy kind of falling in love.. my hubby read it and goes 'holy shit you sound like your going to stalk them' haha. Whatever.


Thanks Torn

-DD

omg soo true esp when you talk to them lol

Posted: Aug 19, 2008

Author Comment:

lol. My hubby still tells me my heart stops when he sees me -rolls eyes- :P Thanks Singergrlone.

I'll be checking on your pieces soon.

-DD

This is soooo awesome! I love the ending,'When you were reading this, he was the only thing on your mind.' Awesome job, Dream. =D

Posted: Aug 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks Gpoet. I love the comments, Happy to have great people viewing my work. I kind of think I'm stupid for putting this piece up but I thought it would be a funny joke.

Anyway, didn't know Y'all would like it so.


:D

-DD

I liked it! I would not tarry over grammatical errors because a person can always clean something up right before it is publicized. I would like to read what Anna has to say, oh my bad, she isn't registered right!?

Posted: Aug 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Hah. Glad to have a friend like youu. (: And As a fact, I'm on my way to fix that whole Article before the night is over


Thanks Nomurcee

-DD

Aww so cute. and forget all those negative comments if grammer counted on this site alot of people wouldn't be on here and it doesn't seem like you'd be stalking them love is complicated and unpredictable, to sum up and in 10 statements you did a great job!

Posted: Oct 29, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks Kdarlin. :)



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